:D
OH childhood...

the beanstalk should have been thicker

maybe a little less fencing....is overwhelming...space the posts further apart?

Not a fan of the fencing.

I agree with the fence. And I think the one cloud going off onto the sleeve may end up in an armpit.

too much fence

do you think they can give me the chance of editing it a bit

Holy shit! I'm totally 100% in love with this! I agree about the fencing, but as it is right now, I would not only buy this but I would probably wear it several times a week! SO CUTE!

good idea, but it just needs more detail. try using the critique section, you'll get good advice.

It will never print.

Maybe make the stalk thicken out in the bottom since that is the beginning of its support/root system. What about adding shoots off the main stalk as well? Good job so far though.

very cute.

the picket fence is too much

That cloud would be in your armpit.

Ok, move the clouds over a bit so it isn't in your armpit, and make the fence less overwhelming.
If you did that much, it's a buy from me.
$4.

Yeah, the fence needs work obviously. But the stalk looks really cool.

The only other thing I'm unsure of is whether or not I'd like a cloud in my armpit. Hey, at least you could make it rain if you ever got nervous or anxious. :)

Vine ought to be up, then cross the chest!

Yeah, perhaps have the fence look less-impaling

clean concept.

dont fall on the fence you will be impaled.

Not bad. If you saw "Blue Velvet", I would say that you were trying to create David Lynch's "Jack and the Beanstalk". If you drew Jack climbing up the beanstalk with a gun, you might really have something here. You'd simultaneously be spoofing a fairy tale and reality(school shootings by suburban kids). I give this a 4.