Threadless T-Shirts - being human

being human by dnystwn

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Submitted on:

Dec 03 '07

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Comments:

26 comments

Final average score:

1.83 out of 5

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by dnystwn

A reminder to pause life and see the beauty in ordinary everyday things.

To accomplish that, I created a digital collage of various images that represents various aspects of a person's day (work, city life, sex, health, communication, family, pet, toilet, music, etc.). with some text that I wrote on this subject matter

xerosoft on Dec 03 '07

I wouldn't like to depreciate the personal value you invest in your poem, however, I would like to state that the transition between the third and fourth line of speaking of "you", then of "us" feels slightly unwieldly when read.

dnystwn on Dec 04 '07

good point and I appreciate the the time you spent on actually reading the poem itself.

thank you!

If this t-shirt goes to print, I'll change that to be more consistent.

yiofu on Dec 04 '07

it's great Danny! I voted for you^^

yoheit on Dec 04 '07

Nice!

eemn825 on Dec 04 '07

how about a more detailed picture of the design? it is hard to see what is going on with this.

Costumedzyner on Dec 04 '07

I really love this design. Though I would re-think the color. Red is a tough color for many people to wear.

SoulfumeInc on Dec 04 '07

all good advice, but no thanking god! that excludes a lot of people

dnystwn on Dec 04 '07

thanks for the feedback, but I won't remove the thanking God part.

This might not be the most inclusive or even politically correct design, but it's what I believe in. I value honesty in my design.

SoulfumeInc on Dec 04 '07

fair enough

mina_ophelia_kat on Dec 04 '07

I think red is a good color for this, esp. with the black.
The more I look at it, the more I like it! $4

dnystwn on Dec 04 '07

yeah I tried more subtle colors, but they didn't feel as powerful as this bright red.

jdjustine on Dec 04 '07

I love your work, Danny!

orwell on Dec 04 '07

your design looks great and it's message is uplifting! i like it a lot!

psuedopotamus on Dec 04 '07

I really like it, but I have to agree with SoulfumeInc, being agostic and whatnot. I understand you want to express your opinion and you have every right to, and I am all for freedom of expression. I just think without those two words maybe more people would want to buy it. Anyway I like the concept and I'm an advocate of life-apreceation so I'll give it a 4.

roadkill3d on Dec 04 '07

beautiful!

BlacXiii on Dec 05 '07

it's beautiful! the colors perfect. It's a collection of some of the most vital things to human survial.

I_Am_Delilah on Dec 05 '07

Too much text for a t-shirt.

AdyLady on Dec 05 '07

I like it a lot, and it's a beautiful poem, but I wouldn't buy it simply because of the God reference.

That's not an attack on anyone, and I respect your belief Danny, but not sure it will go down well with people of any other faith (including athiesm).

Wennie on Dec 05 '07

wow :]

hollyhawks on Dec 06 '07

i never wear red, but i would in this shirt.

TheMorningstar on Dec 06 '07

How's about you put up the poem in your artist comments or something? Not all of us have the patience of the eyesight/monitor resolution to read your text.

dnystwn on Dec 06 '07

I designed the poem text as a visual element that's part of the design, which is why I didn't make it as prominent as the collage of objects.

the only text that is really important to be legible in this design is "being human"