Ghost Story

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Ghost Story by jmaster626

Scoring finished:

718 days ago

Submitted on:

Dec 03 '07

Scored by:

1,616 people

Comments:

32 comments

Final average score:

2.69 out of 5

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by jmaster626

If I were a ghost I'd be scared of Bill Murray too.

Thanks to everyone in the critiques section for all the help, you guys rock!

DaveSmith suggested using Faux Suede ink all the colored areas and High Density ink for the lines, so if those will work I'm all for it (thanks Dave). I guess the speech bubble may not work with the suede and if that's the case then normal plastisol would be just fine.

nadienne on Dec 03 '07

you should make the kiddy-ghosties look more scared... and fine-tune the buster's figure... looks slightly choppy (around the leg); i'd also work on the zap-line.... mebbe make it look more broken-up? add lines jutting out of it? mebbe some smoke around the ghostie? just suggestings....

urbanwolf on Dec 03 '07

AHAHAHHAH! i LUV it!! I would totally totally buy this!

backgammon on Dec 03 '07

Well, I mean, I do love Bill Murray...

backgammon on Dec 03 '07

Well, I mean, I do love Bill Murray...

Nami3000 on Dec 03 '07

I like it up top

mexicutioner124 on Dec 03 '07

This is awesome! $5.

cindylou on Dec 03 '07

I laughed out loud...

travisaurus rex on Dec 04 '07

I can't think of a good placement for this one, but I'm not a fan of either of those options.

hershel on Dec 04 '07

looks good...but there´s smth not really workin for me with that bubble....hmm..maybe still too bright?...anyway...4

jmaster626 on Dec 04 '07

thanks for the comments everyone =)

500lakh on Dec 04 '07

reeeeeeeeally nice. $4.

K0MMIE on Dec 04 '07

excellent...5

Mesenchyme on Dec 04 '07

Hahaha, awesome.

xstarlitnight on Dec 04 '07

I like it placed in the middle of the shirt

ilovetheopera on Dec 05 '07

soo cute. the baby ghosts should look scareder though. i especially love the one that's like O.O

BlacXiii on Dec 05 '07

I think it's so cool that that we get to see the ghosts' side of the story. i like it.

El Keter ben Tzadik on Dec 05 '07

HAHAHAHA!

CopyKill on Dec 05 '07

hehehe, very funny! =)
maybe if you worked a bit more on the ghostbusters-character and the bubble-content in general, i'd buy it!

CopyKill on Dec 05 '07

center placement by the way.. definately!

ehrady on Dec 05 '07

i wish the stuff going on in the story bubble was more compelling to look at, because right now this is a great idea but sort of uninteresting to look at. the ghosts are good, so its not all bad.