Fallen Star
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Dec 03 '07
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is this supposed to be a "video game" star?
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im pretty sure its a mario bros. invincibility star
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but i dont know why its falling into a crack
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It created the crack when it fell.
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the crevice is nice but it kinds blends in bc of the color scheme.
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love it.
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maybe some motion lines would help get the "falling" across better.
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cute, but it's lacking something.
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Yes, nice design but missing something. It looks like it's stepping into the crack to me, maybe going to hide or explore.
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I think if you make the crack a little bit smaller around the point in the ground, it would help illustrate that it created it from falling.
Also, the lines at the end of the cracks seem too long -- with such a simple design as the star, I think it would look better if the cracks just ended at the point 3 |
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as was said, the crack needs work.
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Crack ist gut! Idea ist Uber.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Dec 07 '07 Maybe just the star with some crutches and one of its star edges bandaged up?
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Zazu: I know what you mean. I ummed and ahhed about putting the eyes on, rather than leaving it just a star shape. The eyes give it character, but perhaps that's a bad thing, because i think the original looks more static and embedded in the ground: http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3244/carlielightblue1starsublz4.jpg
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good skill.
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Totaly rad!
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