You Deplete Me
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Nov 28 '07
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1.65 from 1,570 votes
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I don't think the bus is required, besides, buses run on DIESEL.
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Yes, an SUV would have been more appropriate. Buses, at least, save on fuel by transporting a lot of people at once.
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How about a Hummer/SUV instead of a school bus. Otherwise great.
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kinda funny - you need a way better design though.
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1. hummer or SUV or stretch SUV
2. not so angular - could it have more of a hand-drawn feel? 3. hand-write the letters, not typed. i really like the joke though! i'm all about insulting SUV drivers. |
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agreed with winkinthecity - then its a 5 but for now a 3
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FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 29 '07 winkinthecity is very good at summing up what others have said and adding her own good ideas! she should do this for every designer as a public service to making submissions that much better the next time we see them. Anywho, a really cute idea that need s another roll around in the hay pile in your mind before being perfecto.
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i dont like this one
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this looks like it was put together in paint.
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and that's not a good thing.
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and that's not a good thing
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wow lilith is a jerk.
i feel that you've got a good concept. just work around a few more details. |
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hey! haha ... thanks for all the comments/criticism/encouragement
i did not know that buses ran on diesel ... so definitely, i will take that into account once i revise this! plus the SUV suggestion ... and everything winkinthecity said!!! and i'll definitely try to make this less paint-ish |
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busses run on hydrogen! Well... ours do
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i like the sad face..but HATE the bus! with the updates already discussed..it will be great $3
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how does the like market compare, i mean this is based in the US, i'm not sure if i'm loving th Liter (s) perhaps change to gallons.... its up to you. and i dont see the need to get rid of the angular ness, but deffinately re write text and i like the school bus, but hey thats just me
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It ha already been said- change the bus and give a more "natural" feeling. Besides that, nice.
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woo 5 dollazz throw 'em up!
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good concept. but i am thinking SUV// and maybe a bicyclist speeding by with a smirk on his face
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definitely an SUV... school buses are great and definitely not the problem here
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SUV
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I am not really sure about how much a liter of gasoline would cost but wouldn't the price be higher than the amount of gasoline?
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Change liter to gallon.
Change school bus to hummer. Awesome concept- love the title. |
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