Super 8
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1642 days ago
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Nov 28 '07
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Would appreciate your comments. Thanks!
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such a square design doesn't work on a tshirt. and the colors are a bit bright. the concept isn't very clever either.
I would suggest submitting to critiques first next time. sorry to be so negative. but its better than not saying anything, right? |
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i like it! :]
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thanks, but i reckon i will get more feedback here than on the forum (i tried).
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that's an old-school super 8mm movie camera.
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too bright
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great colors
great sketch style awful choice to retain the boxy feel loosen up the borders a bit and you got a sweet t |
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I like it, but I wish it wasn't so boxy.
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thanks for the invaluable feedback! i will surely do something less boxy next time.
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this is awesome!- i haven't seen many film shirts yet i like the bright colors too.
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I like the design the boxy feel can easily be resolve possible by creating a halftone of the yellow and black. Or allowing the yellow parts to fade into the shirt,cool concept and design nice composition.Keep subbing bro.
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I lie it a lot, especially since it's of super 8 cameras. but it loses aesthetic appeal due to the cut-off look at the edges. we want to see whole images.
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I like it, the bright colors are good for me. maybe stretch out the rays, but other than that, RAD
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Thanks for all the kind comments and constructive criticism. I am encouraged to improve myself and work on more submissions!
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Use a different background other than the japanese flag starburst. You used it on 2 other designs?
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they are from the same stencil, but painted differently
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I love the bold bright colors and the subject matter, although I don't think it's something I would wear. (I stick to a lot of jewel tones and muted colors.)
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