i was in line at the store and i saw this guy that kept talking through those cone thingys, it gave me this idea.

you made the same mistake twice. it's THEY'RE not THEIR and you even mispelled your mistake.

this has way too much text anyway.

I'm assuming that was intentional...

the point of using "their" in order to mispeall it with "ie" is somewhat clever; however, you should have thought of a sentence with the right form of "their/they're" instead of being a fucktard

...dont really vibe with this. people are going to try to read it and what not and they wont get it. cool idea though

The dude isn't very polished relative to the text bubbles, either.

His mouth (and the feminine eyes) really distracted me, and way too text based.

this illustration sucks. this type is cool but you can scrap the rest

Very bananaphoney.

Nice lettering, not really to into the guy or what it says though.

I think it might look more uniform if the text was one large blurb instead of three. Except, i'd leave it without the outline of the bubble; more free flowy, easier to read, alternating green, black, white text to differentiate. I like the character, the collage look; more detail in spots would look more polished.

lol...sorry i suck guys...i'll try harder. thanks for the constructive criticism.

^lol that "sorry i suck guys" doesn't sound right...

sorry people were so mean, but i gotta say that i don't like the guys jack-o-lantern looking mouth. keep trying!
xoxo

personally, i love the illustration. it's weird. i like it. fix the grammar and it's great.

It makes me want to read it, to see what he's saying... ugh now I have a headache