Mister Talker
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1643 days ago
Submitted on:
Nov 27 '07
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1.43 from 1,456 votes
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ginetteginette on Nov 27 '07 you made the same mistake twice. it's THEY'RE not THEIR and you even mispelled your mistake.
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I'm assuming that was intentional...
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the point of using "their" in order to mispeall it with "ie" is somewhat clever; however, you should have thought of a sentence with the right form of "their/they're" instead of being a fucktard
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...dont really vibe with this. people are going to try to read it and what not and they wont get it. cool idea though
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The dude isn't very polished relative to the text bubbles, either.
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His mouth (and the feminine eyes) really distracted me, and way too text based.
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this illustration sucks. this type is cool but you can scrap the rest
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FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 28 '07 Very bananaphoney.
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Nice lettering, not really to into the guy or what it says though.
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I think it might look more uniform if the text was one large blurb instead of three. Except, i'd leave it without the outline of the bubble; more free flowy, easier to read, alternating green, black, white text to differentiate. I like the character, the collage look; more detail in spots would look more polished.
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lol...sorry i suck guys...i'll try harder. thanks for the constructive criticism.
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^lol that "sorry i suck guys" doesn't sound right...
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sorry people were so mean, but i gotta say that i don't like the guys jack-o-lantern looking mouth. keep trying!
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personally, i love the illustration. it's weird. i like it. fix the grammar and it's great.
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2 days later
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It makes me want to read it, to see what he's saying... ugh now I have a headache
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