My Heart Exposed
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Nov 26 '07
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I would move it towards the center more...and on a black tee.
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That's not where my heart is...(or my ribs) I do like your style. I just want my anatomy to be more accurately shown.
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cool illustration, but i agree that it should be on black, and more accurately placed, also maybe a bit smaller
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The heart being one solid color of bright pink looks more like a brain hanging in a rib cage.
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the heart is more behind the sternum(breastbone). its also a lot less lumpy, and tucked comfortably between the lungs. i do like the style though.
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Dude! if that had all kinds of organs exposed it would be halloween/zombie flash-mob MUST HAVE! As is, I like the concept and the execution. The ribs look a bit big though.
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the ribs looks a little big, but as far as heart designs go, i'll say i like this one.
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you do realise for every heart design I see the universe now forces me to kick a puppy to realign the imbalance caused by the shameless use of trite imagery?
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I've seen a lot of 'organs exposed' designs. I like the illustration, but you need to come up with original concepts.
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olie! on Nov 27 '07 Plus, the 'ripped' t-shirt parts make the t-shirt look like it is made out of a tin-foil like material.
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ginetteginette on Nov 27 '07 i think it needs to be shrunk a tiny tiny bit and moved completely off the sleeve.
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th e hearts too big and there arent enough ribs.
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haha...a brain in a ribcage would've been a genious idea as a metaphor maybe for someone who thinks with their heart, Rajara.
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i think the illustration is perfect for a shirt, I dont feel that the anatomy has an effect on the shirt design. Who would seriously going around saying that the heart in your shirt doesnt match actual human anatomy. What you really have to ask your self is where you would wear the shirt or not, and the answer is yes. I would wear this shirt with out any hesitation as it is for sure to attract attention, and thats what it all comes down to.
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I really like this, a lot, but I agree with above - it should be more centered and might look really cool if you put the sternum with a big hole in it or something. It rocks tho!
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I would like to see this in black as well. It's a little too far off to the side, so as others said, it should be moved towards the center (of course still offset to the left). Also I think you need to flip the ribs, they should be coming up towards each other on the side farther from the center. I'm not trying to pick at your anatomy, because I agree you don't need to have drawn the anatomy perfectly, but I think you do need to fix the ribs.
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this is an awesome idea, would be even sweeter on a navy shirt
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I'll check out how the design looks on navy and black...and will post up a link later on.
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How many shirts must be made with a drawn heart on the left?
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I think neavy or black would be a great shirt color
My only prob is the ribs... they just throw me off |
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Here's the black and Navy variations. Also played a bit with the placement. Still on the left side, but off the sleeve.
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/8828/navyblacknv0.jpg Q! |
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I love the black, and I'm with jmarti88, not everything has to be absolutely anatomically correct. I think this is pretty damn close. It's a $5 for me!
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cool concept 5
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roadkill3d on Dec 01 '07 just a little resizing of the design and this is all set. still $5 for great illustration.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Dec 01 '07 I've seen it before, but i like it every time when it's done well. It's like the Hulk had a heart attack and it ripped through the tee!
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placement sucks.
but i like so 5. |
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I think it needs more half tones to really work the 3d element of the design.
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Please put it on black! Also I agree with fixing the ribs and moving the placement slightly to the centre a little. Also perhaps the ribs could be a little less yellow. However I like that the heart looks more like a brain :)
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