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Nov 25 '07
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take out the dotted line for sure
i like it though |
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Yeah, the dotted line needs to go. Other than that, I love it.
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I LOVE GOLF, BUT NOT TO BIG ON YOU'RE DESIGN. I AGREE WITH PYLMS
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i laughed when i saw this. out loud!
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Wonderfully simple and witty!
But move the head of the club so it's more visible. Keep the dotted line, though. Otherwise you lose the concept that the man is suddenly making eye contact with the looming bear. |
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LOVE IT! $5
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love it! $5
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adamwhite on Nov 26 '07 3 for a bear crotch hit
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Erm, that dotted line is necessary to maintain that "tutorial" look. Also, I could tell right off the bat that it was a golf club w/o having to see the head. It'd look less like it was making impact into the crotch if it were visible. I think it's fine as it is.
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I love how the dotted line finishes off the zig-zag. It's not necessary to understand the image, but I think it adds to it quite a bit. I love your designs. Keep them coming :) I still want Play Frisbee to be printed and in my closet. 5
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Maybe if you made the spaces between the dotted line a little bigger it would look better. I like the way it looks though; the dotted line is pretty necessary. If the club was making contact or almost there doesn't matter much to me; I personally think it would make sense either way.
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please print! love this so much!
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great concept, work a bit more on it.
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I'd like it better without the text.
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i think you should keep the dotted line.
maybe increase the space between each dot in the line, as someone said before. $5 |
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keep the dotted line. It made the whole think make sense.
[look up to improve your shot] i love it |
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Grizzly Par!
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dude...that's really awesome ...5$
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