A combination of two of my childhood favorites: dragons and baking cookies, for a grand total of AWESOME.

great for a kid's shirt!

concept is cool but the drawing.. eh.. not so much.

AWESOME idea, i love the concept--especially because it's based off of your own child hood. I think that the drawing could use some work though, at the moment it looks like something that could have been done in ms paint. I absolutely LOVE how happy the dragon looks though!

make the girl slightly bigger, you can't tell that what she's holding are supposed to be cookies. (or unbaked cookies).

Really cute concept, but the execution is weak. Take more time with your line work and it'll pay off big time.

i like the drawing style but i agree that the cookies could be more defined. i love the idea though

I think it'd be funny if the girl's flesh were melting away but they were both still smiling. I don't know if that would make me more likely to buy it, but whatever. But yeah, the drawing could be better.

weak

I have to agree with everyone. I like the concept, and there's nothing wrong with using MS paint, but you have to take time to clean up the lines and work with it it more. I think this sub is premature. You should spend some time in the critiques. It takes a while to get some comments, but it's worth it. Here was one of my favorite critiques using MS Paint. Keep improving!

i dont like the back; it's unnecessary.

Thanks for all the feedback, guys! I didn't use paint, though! This was hand-drawn then edited in photoshop! It *is* meant to emulate a childlike drawing style. I guess it does take a while to get feedback in critiques - I went through several versions for about a week, but this has given me even more feedback. I will certainly be revising!

I second the opinion that the back is unnecessary. Everything else is awesome.