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Doll Eat Doll

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Nov 20 '07
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madeleinealbright
madeleinealbright on Nov 20 '07
the T doesn't appear to have the text on it



w/o which this is dull

brainie
brainie on Nov 20 '07
I like it better without the text. It makes for a better conversation starter.
dmp3579
dmp3579 on Nov 20 '07
I would like to see the text on the shirt. That line is great! why not use it?! This shirt is real close to being a 5 in my book.. if only that awesome tag line was there to tie it together.
Mojie
Mojie on Nov 20 '07
Because then people would say "lose the text."
jennique
jennique on Nov 20 '07
booya, I had tons of these as a kid. I agree with dmp, text would rock this shirt ... hard.
Corybethy
Corybethy on Nov 20 '07
My 1st d-sign.... I thought text was taboo =)
barumunk
barumunk on Nov 21 '07
you should make them eating each other, (subtly) its a bit too straightforward at the mo
Jump Children
Jump Children on Nov 22 '07
i think it's great as it is. i don't want to see text on it myself
sophiesandwich
sophiesandwich on Nov 22 '07
maybe aim them towards each other, with their mouths open like they're about to eat each other
bunnyslippers
bunnyslippers on Nov 24 '07
Well without the text, the shirt is just nesting dolls.

With the text, it's not subtle enough. It's thrusting the joke upon you.



I like sophiesandwich's idea.



Good first submission, next time use the critiques though. :)
Corybethy
Corybethy on Nov 24 '07
Thanks everyone for your comments. I think everyone got caught up in the title which was really just a title. The design was supposed to be just an interpretation of nesting dolls, which I think are really neat. I really love a flat graphic aproach to illustration and this is how I drew the dolls which lend themselves perfectly to this style with their symetric shaping and decorative details.



Anyway, thanks again for the remarks and I'll keep them in mind as I continue to submit. =)
todiefor
todiefor on Nov 24 '07
Since you're new, I'm just wondering if you've had a chance to look at this print.



it's a good first sub though. 3



DJ Flound
DJ Flound on Nov 24 '07
I personally LOVE the text, I feel bad that it seems to be drawing more attention than the design, but it is what caught my eye.
Cheli-Land
Cheli-Land on Nov 25 '07
The icon of the dolls should be use in a different and no usual way in order to create an impact on people... check the link "todie" suggested it's a good reference of I am trying to say... keep up the good work! you have clean colors and execution ...
avalanchelynn
avalanchelynn on Nov 26 '07
love this $5 especially since i was just given a nesting russian doll yesterday ;)
KDLIG
   KDLIG on Nov 26 '07
you could have just shown russian dolls eating each other that would be cool
videovexa
videovexa on Nov 26 '07
Love the dolls, wouls like a different color palette thats warmer.
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