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I might suggest moving the trail away from the center. Also, I don't quite get it. If the guy has a jet-pack on, I would say it needs to be more noticeable.
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I agree with the comment on the trail being in the center of the shirt, but I like the guy's placement. Love your character.
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I re-did it if anyone cares...
http://www.threadless.com/critique/10096/The_Flight_of_the_Flightless |
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