The fall of invisible man
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Nov 19 '07
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That's so cute.
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nice.
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Without the title, the shirt doesn't make sense. It looks like "he" refers to the dog. But I love the shirt idea.
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I agree with Alpha on all counts. I hate to suggest anyone make things more obvious, but perhaps a dotted outline of the man would work?
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The text is awkwardly phrased.
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A shadow of the man would do it, it could be very subtle.
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could someone help me rephrase the text ? [/me is french]
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Switch the title and text?
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héhé why not :p
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I WANNTTT ITTT [:
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don't like to explain my shirts, love silhouettes though...
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maybe a little more detail. liek a subtle brick wall and sidewalk outline with the shadow of the invisible man to indicate what you're trying to illustrate.
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Great concept but i agree on having a shadow or outline or something for the man
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No, don't switch the title and the text.
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I like the title/text switch idea.
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Yeah, I would switch the title and text.
I love this though, 5$ |
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awesome :) do the switch, it's still clever.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 24 '07 I was gonna say the title is a way better sentence to put on the shirt as well.
I'd also have a pooper scooper dangling in mid-air to mak the idea even funnier. |
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i'd say put the text in french, since thats what you designed it in
and yes outline or something for the man |
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i agree with switching the title and the text.. the wall and a shadow/outline would look good too but could turn out bad.
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headlemk has a some great ideas, i agree the fact it's an invisible man should probably be underscored a bit more. the idea though is gold.
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i like the idea of switching the title and the text =]
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switching the title and the text would be way better, but keep the invisible man invisible
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"the fall of invisible man"
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