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Great idea. Could use some more detail Based on your score, I'd suggest amping it up (like, adding faces, perhaps some sort of abstract organic background thing) and resubbing.
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funny concept :) .. but i think it could be better if it was just a caterpillar and a buterfly as they are, rather than half human-like things
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I dont like the typeace. And it looks like the girl just hangs there and the boy's face looks like it's cut-and-paste.
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Love the concept. The illustration is "good"... with a little more detail it could be "great!"... The idea of the characters being non-human is pretty cool. That might take it to a different level.
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I love it. Maybe make the butterfly look more extravagant (bigger wings, colourful pattern) so it is really clear that the beauty surpasses that of the caterpillar... $5 anyways.
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great idea (as it's been said) and the illustration is certainly coherent but there's something a little bland about it.
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Love the idea - very cool. Don't liike the type face so much and the boy and girls face are a bit mismatched to the bodies... rework it though - then I'll buy it.
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i like the positive message that same old doesn't have to be same old, bring this tshirt on i say, this aussie lurves it
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this is a really great idea. It either needs to be more simplistic or more detailed. Also, the placement on the shirt is kinda weird, i think center placement would work better.
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How about skip the words and just use the illustration? the fact that it's a girl and boy is perfect..girls hit puberty first and it's awkward...speaks for itself without the cliche line.
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