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What is on his hands?
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Oh... it's umm, a molotov cocktail that hasn't been lit yet.
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yea i was also wondering what the red thing was... might want to make that clearer
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olie! on Nov 19 '07 Attack of the Brown Rectangular Angle
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Agreed, the bottom needs to find it's way to become one with the shirt.
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How come the birds don't have shadows?
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and what conversation is this guy having? and with whom?
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Nice design, but perhaps the connection between the illo and message is a little too obscure.
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the birds dont have shadows because they are vampires, duh!
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what is a conversationist?
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One given to or skilled at conversation. No wait, Webster's says that's a conversationalist.
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Ummm... can I take this one back?
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Well, props on the Helvetica
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maybe if the brown mountains wrapped around the whole thing instead of just being cut off. it would be much better if that were the case
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Font is Basic Commercial actually – I didn't think it'd be possible to print all over the shirt...?
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I dont really like the abrupt stop of the ground, nor do I like the squareness of it.
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Agreed ^ Should have it continue to the sides of the shirt.
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what is he holding?
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I thought vampires didn't have reflections?
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no, vampires don't have shadows either, this is fact.
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maybe if the ground came up from the bottom of the shirt you could get rid of the boxiness.
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but what is he holding????
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Pretty cool idea, but I think the above comments speak for themselves. Probably do a critique before submitting next time.
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Your style and ideas definately have prospects but this needs some work. Next time try a critique first :]
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Froagie, if you read the previous comments, you would have known that it is an unlit molotov cocktail. It could use some work, but i like the idea.
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I don't know what it is, but something about this shirt gives me shivers.
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hi all, thanks for all your comments! Will definitely do a critique next time I submit a shirt, cheers!
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It seems like you need to do bad things to be heard, does this have to be the case?
Burn a tree. Scare a few birds. Tell the world how you did it and why. Create a dialogue. And justify yourself.
But, don't think too much about it.
Simple seven shade print on a t-shirt as ominous as dusk, clear as day or black as night. Yay!