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eye ojai

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Nov 15 '07
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by peyote
The text reads: "ojo oeil auge olho eye occhio oog" Which is eye in different languages. I hope you all like it. Its my second submision. Cheers!
aust1n
aust1n on Nov 15 '07
I like it.



I'd say to make the swirls more detailed as the eye is, and change the font to something more elegant or simply lose it.
theangeli
theangeli on Nov 15 '07
I have to agree with Austin.
kansasdreamer
kansasdreamer on Nov 15 '07
Also, you've got so many languages, why not put some blue in there? Maybe a little violet? Mix up the eye color as much as la lingua.



Occhi rule.
ogro
ogro on Nov 15 '07
I like it as it is! Good job!
peyote
peyote on Nov 15 '07
The text, yea, I know it was one of those things...should I put it or not?...put it won, ha!...Of course it can be eliminated, no problem. Thanks for the comments.
ElleNoir
ElleNoir on Nov 15 '07
i like this design. i don't mind the text - the font for it is perfect. at first glance, i thought the text was little flowers. the swirls could use more detail. the solid color detracts from the eye.
Sheila6
Sheila6 on Nov 15 '07
I actually don't mind the text, Ithought it was just little swirlies at first, which made it extra neat. I love the shape of the eye, personally I'd rather wear it on dark purple, there'd be so much contrast between the colors.
lajlaj
lajlaj on Nov 16 '07
i don't like the text.
glubslyme
glubslyme on Nov 17 '07
I love this design!
DrCaboose
DrCaboose on Nov 17 '07
I think it looks fine.



The text is wonderfully wrapped.
ratnanavel
ratnanavel on Nov 17 '07
i like it, with or without the text. $5 good luck
kerso
kerso on Nov 18 '07
great, I love it!
no_allegiances
no_allegiances on Nov 19 '07
Don't have a problem with the disparity between the eye detail and the swirl detail but think the text is superfluous... would prefer it if it was purely decoration instead. Either way, $4, great work!
IheartJuanValdez
IheartJuanValdez on Nov 19 '07
as is... very pure palette and the languages are a beau touch.. I love it
Hennessey
Hennessey on Nov 20 '07
like it without the text. cleverness or 'special meanings' rarely make a shirt better. it just has to look good first. good job. $5
ck2
ck2 on Nov 21 '07
your good with colors.
naxvel
naxvel on Nov 21 '07
I think is great! Good job keep doing it!
doodles85
doodles85 on Nov 21 '07
I love this its fabulous! :D)
peyote
peyote on Nov 22 '07
Thank you all for your comments...I'll keep submitting!... =0)
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