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I love the colors and your style, but the form and placement are what i'd bank on if something were to stop this shirt from going all the way. Open it up a bit maybe?
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I agree with Ivan. You could maybe open it up by letting some of the sticky and swirly thingies extend more out of the form....
...right Ivan? |
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either open it up like they said...
or like theangeli said, make it fill the shirt up more. its too unique a design to be squeezed into the chest area of the shirt. |
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I'm really attracted to this design piece. It works small for me because it makes the viewer come in to take a closer look, I like that with an abstract work.
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