This is based off a name for an old Fantasy Football team I had. I have a beer-label-looking logo as well (think Guinness), but it references fantasy football so really wouldn't go well on a shirt.

The medium gold (letter outlines) should be a metallic ink if possible.

nice...but it seem "commercial" compared to a lot of the other designs submitted

I think the stretched shadowy text detracts. I have to agree with Korie (if I understand her correctly). This seems like a mass produced piece like the imaginary team shirts you might pick up at a big box store. Doesn't seem to fit the Threadless image.

Nice tight design. I like the detail on the lettering.

no no no

It's supposed to be commercial. It is modeled after a commercial. Not every t-shirt has to be a cartoon pun.

Graphics are good.

Too westcoast choppery