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vengeance by 0Jim0

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Submitted on:

Nov 13 '07

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36 comments

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1.44 out of 5

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I thought I would do a design with flock and embroidery.

hope you all like it!
Please comment.

0Jim0 on Nov 13 '07

sorry about the quality of the image, I should have payed a little more attention before uploading.

Bramish on Nov 13 '07

The flock or embroidery really aren't neccessary for this design, in my opinion.

Tonteau on Nov 13 '07

Fluffy suede print on the ball would be good.

Don Kharlos on Nov 13 '07

My question is, why is the ball green instead of the standard yellow? I would think that after whuppin on the racket... maybe red , but green?

Bramish on Nov 13 '07

Oh, see I didn't get that it was a tennis ball and raquet. My bad.

0Jim0 on Nov 13 '07

so it ok now that you know it's a tennis ball Bramish?

Why Green? Maybe we just have green tennis balls up here in Canada.. I've always used green balls...

Thats no big deal any way, it's easy to switch before I goes to print.

Tonteau: I wasn't sure it there is a major difference between suede or flock. So really I would use either.

Sorry I just wrote so much.

Lanneld on Nov 13 '07

flock and embroidery - yes. but this - no.

murgles on Nov 13 '07

Yeah a yellow ball on the green ground would look better I think... Ive never seen a dark green tennis ball :P

0Jim0 on Nov 13 '07

I didn't realize you guys would be that particular about the colour. I've never used a "dark green" tennis ball either; but last I checked they didn't have arms and legs either.

;P

cottoneyelizzer on Nov 13 '07

didn't realize what it was at first either, Y prob would help, but more than anything, all the comments (especially ^ that one) made me like the design more! Good job stirrin the pot oJimo - and nice artwork too ;)

lyssie on Nov 13 '07

Oh!! I was so confused it looks nothing like a tennis ball and i had no idea that thing was a racket? I thought it was an agry pea on some funky shaped ice...........yeah doesn't make sense

lyssie on Nov 13 '07

flock AND embroidery is a little bit overkill

color aside people should be able to tell what it is by looking at it not have to have someone explain what everything is...and the color affects a viewer's ability to recognize the image...sorry

winkinthecity on Nov 13 '07

more of the racket would be really helpful - i didn't get it at all until i read the comments.

Tortuga on Nov 13 '07

i totally got that it was a tennis ball... the ones i've seen are all light green, not so much yellow. But w.e

neuilly on Nov 13 '07

I got it was a tennis ball but it took a bit to notice it was a racket...

0Jim0 on Nov 13 '07

I rushed posting this one a little, I'll admit it. However I don't regret doing it. I should have put more of the racket and I actually illustrated more of it that I removed in the end because I that it was overkill.

Guess I was wrong!
hahaha

anurakthi on Nov 13 '07

Yeah I thought it was a pea too =0! Guess reading the comments helped clarify the picture.

lyssie on Nov 13 '07

yup you were wrong

Bio-bot 9000 on Nov 13 '07

Needs a little more of the racket to be totally "get-able". To me it looks like the ball is breaking up a cement divider, and there happens to be silly string everywhere.

lemingsrock16 on Nov 13 '07

i thought it was a huge pea :)

wildmustard on Nov 14 '07

The white lines make it pretty clear that it is a tennis ball, whatever its color. The fluorescent yellow-green color is more common here in the States (I remember when tennis balls were white!). Perhaps if the racquet were a metallic color it would be more obvious what it was?

FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 14 '07

I honestly had no idea what was going on until i looked at some of the comments....and i really tried hard to figure it out! Maybe too hard...lol. Anywho, i like the idea, but DEF more of the racket in pieces either far-away or close-up all over the tee would be better and seem more prolific anyway. Maybe make the lil' nunchucks a bit more loose as well, but nice idea that would be killer on a resub. Good luck!

0Jim0 on Nov 14 '07

This is one of those time when I wish I could pull a design early. I'm sorry to everyone here that I subbed something that clearly wasn't finished and I will not re-sub this.

0Jim0 on Nov 14 '07

I thought I should add that it's nice to get some real feedback for once.

lajlaj on Nov 16 '07

the flock is a really good idea for a tennis ball. unfortunately i'm not a huge fan of the design really.

brooklynhype on Nov 16 '07

i totally got it.
tennis balls are kind of greenish anyhow.
lovin'.

autumn_firefly on Nov 16 '07

the ball should be a neon green-yellow - yeah the fact that it's a racket isn't immediately clear

mertenhippie on Nov 16 '07

that's what critique is for...but I like this shirt

Saloc on Nov 16 '07

Don't apologize for subbing it; it's a good idea. :) Just make the tennis ball yellow (just cause tennis balls are pretty widely recognized as yellow) and add a bit more of the racket and you're good.

Mickellerox on Nov 17 '07

oohhh! it's a RACKET. dig the concept. $4

0Jim0 on Nov 17 '07

I realize thats what critique is for... but for some odd reason I was feeling rushed to get it out, and I had realized it had problems.

I'm glad that a lot of you are diggn' the concept though.

MikeeTeevee on Nov 17 '07

A good design. Obvious but: Yellow ball on a grass-green tee would make the concept stand out more. :-)