Her first gray hare.
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Submitted on:
Nov 07 '07
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it's BEAUTIFUL! love it. $5.
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the hair in the down the longest side doesn't match
would keep it all flowy - but i like the concept |
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love puns. like the idea. but not really into the hare, it's kinda stiff.
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like the concept but it need something else. Je ne sais quoi.
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this is beautful!!!!! $5
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I love the idea, but the design doesnt pull it off too well.
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the design on the woman clashes with the design of the bunny. rework the bunny and you've got yourself a pretty cool shirt
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i'd like it if you just took out the hare.
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Thanks to everyone for the constructive criticism! I'm a bit new at this, so it's very much appreciated.
Hmm. The general consensus seems to be this design would be much better off if it went hareless (not hairless). I like how the hair clashes with the rest of the picture because that was sort of the point in the first place when this was first started. But let's say theoretically there wasn't a hare. What could be done to make it visually interesting and not just a blah bunch of face-shaped gray lines? |
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Erk. Correction: I like how the HARE clashes with the rest of the picture.
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It doesn't have to be a pun. The lady with more detail would be better.
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O come on, people! The hare is what makes this special! It's like "aww a nice lady, but what''s that weird looking grey hare doing there.. O Hahaha! "
and I also like how the hare's style contrasts the style of the rest of the illustration. Good work! |
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I love the concept, I wish the illustration were executed better. Next time, try putting your design up for critique before you submit, you'll probably get better results.
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Woot woot for simple puns.
You can get a much better view of the design here:
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/9804/grayhairalonegu6.png
Outdated and free graphics software doesn't necessarily make decent web-ready images.