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Her first gray hare.

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DaRobinBot

About my design

by DaRobinBot
Get it?

Woot woot for simple puns.



You can get a much better view of the design here:

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/9804/grayhairalonegu6.png



Outdated and free graphics software doesn't necessarily make decent web-ready images.
raintree
raintree on Nov 07 '07
it's BEAUTIFUL! love it. $5.
KrazieKorie
KrazieKorie on Nov 08 '07
the hair in the down the longest side doesn't match



would keep it all flowy - but i like the concept
gluttonY
gluttonY on Nov 09 '07
love puns. like the idea. but not really into the hare, it's kinda stiff.
hollywva
hollywva on Nov 09 '07
like the concept but it need something else. Je ne sais quoi.
steve_wirzba
steve_wirzba on Nov 09 '07
this is beautful!!!!! $5
jadethyre
jadethyre on Nov 10 '07
I love the idea, but the design doesnt pull it off too well.
AgentSuprock
AgentSuprock on Nov 12 '07
the design on the woman clashes with the design of the bunny. rework the bunny and you've got yourself a pretty cool shirt
iwillbprincess
iwillbprincess on Nov 12 '07
i'd like it if you just took out the hare.
DaRobinBot
DaRobinBot on Nov 13 '07
Thanks to everyone for the constructive criticism! I'm a bit new at this, so it's very much appreciated.



Hmm.



The general consensus seems to be this design would be much better off if it went hareless (not hairless). I like how the hair clashes with the rest of the picture because that was sort of the point in the first place when this was first started.



But let's say theoretically there wasn't a hare. What could be done to make it visually interesting and not just a blah bunch of face-shaped gray lines?
DaRobinBot
DaRobinBot on Nov 13 '07
Erk. Correction: I like how the HARE clashes with the rest of the picture.
Rajiara
Rajiara on Nov 13 '07
It doesn't have to be a pun. The lady with more detail would be better.
FVG
FVG on Nov 14 '07
O come on, people! The hare is what makes this special! It's like "aww a nice lady, but what''s that weird looking grey hare doing there.. O Hahaha! "



and I also like how the hare's style contrasts the style of the rest of the illustration.



Good work!
sarahbobera
sarahbobera on Nov 14 '07
I love the concept, I wish the illustration were executed better. Next time, try putting your design up for critique before you submit, you'll probably get better results.
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