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Mute by force by asdf1239

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384 days ago

Submitted on:

Nov 07 '07

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28 comments

Final average score:

1.70 out of 5

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anoidiona on Nov 07 '07

i like the colors... i think i might like it better if the barb wire wasn't so bold...

kaze_windsa on Nov 07 '07

The helicopter means?

tigerdoy on Nov 07 '07

without helicopter seems more better =)

damnhot on Nov 07 '07

Yep, leave the heli in the hangar and it looks great ;-)

KrazieKorie on Nov 07 '07

Is a military statement being made?

Would love it without barbed wire and helicopter...

FullOfOz on Nov 07 '07

very nice! maybe a change of colors?

theangeli on Nov 07 '07

barbed wire seems a bit heavy-handed. Helicopter looks cool, but doesn't seem to fit. Image not quite balanced. Awesome colors, though. I just think this one needs more work.

seeber on Nov 07 '07

different placement perhaps?

stubbythumbs on Nov 07 '07

i suggest ignoring all previous comments. this is wonderful!

5$

Caseroo on Nov 07 '07

i dont get how the barbed wire and copter fit in

KILLZ on Nov 07 '07

something wrong with the composition--this should be interesting if done in a different way. i feel like the barbwire is off, or could be utilized better or something

MoveTheClouds on Nov 07 '07

I think it's really cool, but somehow the composition is just...odd.

I'm thinking, put the barbed wire lower down, or something. Or get rid of the helicopter, because I find it really distracting.

Still, it's an awesome design.

poohbearmama on Nov 07 '07

Without helicopter and wire, a 5. With, a 4

geewally on Nov 08 '07

There's too much going on. Remove the barbed wire and helicopter. Keep to one simple visual idea.

aaalman on Nov 08 '07

too cliche
too bad
=0

winkelmander on Nov 08 '07

I would've liked it without the heli & barbed wire!

bassooner on Nov 08 '07

i dont like the placement (maybe higher), like the trumpet dude and hand, dont get the heleicopter and barbed wire uncohesive.

thejosher on Nov 10 '07

I too don't get the helicopter and barbed wire. :/

JTFX on Nov 10 '07

I think its like.. the call for 'over the top' of trench warfare being snubbed by 'the hand of god' or perhaps 'the resistance of the people to war' etc.

Which is a cool idea.. unfortunately.. the chopper ruins it as there were no helicopters around when people were jumping trenches to the sound of trumpets...

sorry if I've totally missed the point. Just my interpretation

emem on Nov 10 '07

Interesting. I think you should try this again, without the helicopter and barbed wire. Maybe have the hand descending from upper left of the shirt to mute the trumpet? This version just isn't working.

gorebabyx on Nov 11 '07

Ohhh! I love this. : D
The barbed wire looks like it should be jumbeled with the other
things aswell, not just sitting there. :)

$5!

Jason Turner on Nov 11 '07

nice, but the barb wire is a bit distracting

erin_frances on Nov 11 '07

YES PLEASE! as a flute player I LOVE this shirt!

Perrie on Nov 11 '07

I think, rather, I know I like it as just the trumpeteer getting silenced by the giant hand of awesomeness. Then I'd totally be buying it.

nuscrack on Nov 12 '07

not diggin the barb wire

knitteresa on Nov 12 '07

the hand and the barbed wire stop abruptly, appearing to be floating in space. there is nothing to tie all the elements together. there is possibility here, but i think it needs more work.