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MoveTheClouds

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by MoveTheClouds
BULLETxKISSES
BULLETxKISSES on Nov 05 '07
Oh how cute!!!! :D Broken hearts... I NEED this shirt... not gonna lie. $5



Oh and I like it on the blue :)

-e
MoveTheClouds
MoveTheClouds on Nov 05 '07
Many thanks! Glad you like it.
butacaverde
butacaverde on Nov 05 '07
i'd like it a little lower on the shirt. not up by the collar where it seems to kinda choke the person wearing it..
naggie
naggie on Nov 05 '07
I heard these love pills are ilegal

just in case, take the smaller piece... and drink water
naggie
naggie on Nov 05 '07
I heard these love pills are ilegal

just in case, take the smaller piece... and drink lost of water
beardedlady
beardedlady on Nov 05 '07
Yeah, I'd like it lower on the shirt... too. :D
GoGoGlamBam
GoGoGlamBam on Nov 05 '07
Likewise, lower on the shirt. I liked where you were going with the whole assembly belt idea, but this brings out the intended message more, I think.
raeinar
raeinar on Nov 05 '07
lower on the shirt but much love
quite_a_spectacle
quite_a_spectacle on Nov 06 '07
this is really cute! i agree, set it like 3 inches lower on the shirt and it's good to go
MoveTheClouds
MoveTheClouds on Nov 06 '07
(I am loving the Mean People Suck avatar.)



Thanks, everyone! All suggestions are most helpful.



Also: Somehow, my initial comment didn't get posted with the submission, so I'd just like to add how this shirt came into being. It's based on a very simple photograph I took a few years ago: one of my first black-and-white shots, which I developed by hand in a darkroom and all that. All of the hearts in that shot were white, and all of them were turned over, so they didn't say anything. I thought it'd be more interesting to have them say different things.



Again, thanks for all the comments!
Louis Lampart
Louis Lampart on Nov 06 '07
The Post-its are great!
auxocrome
auxocrome on Nov 07 '07
Awesomeness, thy tones are pastel. $5!
iroktheboybeaters
iroktheboybeaters on Nov 08 '07
I'd like it lower on the shirt too. Also, I wonder what it'd be like as a wraparound.
alexandras_photographs
alexandras_photographs on Nov 08 '07
i love everything about it, and the colors are perfect! its cool to hear that it was inspired by a b&w print of yours. =]
Sammy T
Sammy T on Nov 09 '07
Great, but I'd also like to see it placed lower, maybe level with the armpits?
MoveTheClouds
MoveTheClouds on Nov 10 '07
If I place it level with the armpits, I'll have to shrink it slightly to keep it from actually touching the seams of the sleeves. But yeah, I agree with everyone so far: that's probably a better placement.



Thanks, all, for the comments!
JTFX
JTFX on Nov 10 '07
maybe lose the text?
no_allegiances
no_allegiances on Nov 12 '07
Very cute – positioning throws me at bit – $4 for concept!
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