Too much white space. Needs more black space.
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Nov 05 '07
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you can never have enough white space. as long as it's used appropriately, of course
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How long before some tool says "lose the text"?
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Lose the text.
(Kidding, this is great) |
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mezo on Nov 05 '07 Huh. I never get that complaint. Not like "please make my logo BIGGER."
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haha I love this! I think this all the time when my graphic design or photography teachers talk about "too much white space".....I love it. I'd buy it in a second.
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It would only work on a black t-shirt...
One for the designers! :) I love a bit of space in a design.... Look at Apple, how that has worked for them. |
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Joelnz on Nov 06 '07 Cant go wrong with helvetica
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san serif to the max - i would get this.
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Gives me nightmares but I'd get one
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Ah, Helvetica, you got me. Love the comments, folks, love it even more that you "get it." Me lovee the white space too. Thanks for the support.
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obviously designed by some famous architect!
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Brilliant! Of course the next comment from the client will be. "Did you intend for the letters to be cut off like that?
nice one. |
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Where's the logo, I can't see the logo, add a logo and make it bigger!
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Nice concept. Re-design it as a big NASA patch for it to REALLY work. IMHO, of course...
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Haha, awesome! But it may need more flyout boxes and 3D effects. Maybe some gradients and clipart. ( ;
I would wear this to work if I could. |
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How long did it take ya to make this masterpiece? Get the fuck off my threadless...
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^I can always smell ignorance when the F-bomb is dropped.
This is awesome, but maybe some random photoshop brushes, half-tones, skulls, and paint splatters/drips would look nice. And make it a wraparound. I love it. |
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^My sincerest apologies.
(fixed) "get the fudge off my threadless..." |
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WOOOW$5
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Love the drawing but lose the text for a $5
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FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 11 '07 It's the same as all the people who automatically say "no white shirt!" no matter if it really benefits the design or not (like "Bad apple" really works well being on white. nice sentiment but Threadless is less of a designer-injoke tee place than defunker.com or teetonic.com. Good luck!
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Not really sure about this. It's sort of a slogan that just requires a little bit of graphic assistance to get it across the line.
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its simple and good! most people moan about too much white space here on this site and i think white space is perfect. but even this is great! 5$ and id buy it
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How long did it take ya to make this masterpiece? Get the fuck off my threadless...
1. Who made threadless yours? 2. Who cares how long it takes to make as long as it looks good. This is great $5 don't listen to all the people telling you to add splatters, wraparound and make it "flashy" it's a simple design that I highly enjoy. |
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My english teacher would love this. Haha.
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I strongly agree with Todow.
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not sure whether it really works on any colors other than black. otherwise, great shirt!
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was just going to a the same thing as bananariva cos it says needs more black space
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Sorry to be anal, but if you're going to try one of these the kerning between the letters is what makes / breaks. Just a couple of tweaks? Great idea otherwise...
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4 days later
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Thanks for the tips, FRICKINAWESOME, that's very much appreciated. I know this was a bit too designer-y for Threadless' typical crowd, but what the heck. Since I'm a designer what can draw, I'll be adding illustrative stuff soon enough!
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