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Is that a thought cloud beside the ghost's head?
I'm kinda lost. I'll postpone scoring till it become a little clearing what all is going on here. |
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his head is pointy looks like a kkk member almost just don't make it look so much like a cloak (i.e. the sleeves the head is pointy and falling back like a hood)
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I think he's punching in on the crow time clock. But it does kind of look like he's gonna burn some crosses after that.
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Close, but no cigar.
I'm with everyone, here. This could easily be altered into something really cool. As it is now, I don't understand the point. And yes, the ghost is too pointy. |
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maybe the crow is giving a message to the ghost to take it to someone else in the afterlife? that was my first impression.
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I agree w/ greenstone. I think he's sending a letter to his girlfriend. But their relationship is on the rocks, hence the sigh.
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definitely too kkk looking. p.s. a good shirt should not have to be examined, you should understand it even if you only see it at a glance
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