Breakfast for champions.

love your drawing and concept!
like to see it coloured too! :D
5$

Love the IDEA! The only thing I would say is that maybe it should be on a light blue or something to give it a little punch!

ditto on colors and score $5

Hah, awesome (:

I you had put it into the critique section first. I would have sad that it needs a little color. Still great 4

I like this but I think it might be too big on the shirt.
Great idea though. $4

I love it. Gimme one!

yes! great concept, but I think it could benefit from some color :)

so: great idea, but quite not developped enough. why dont you rework and repost it now?

smaller on the shirt, i would make it more detailed.

more detail (like a splash of colour here and there) would be perfect! but i SO want this shirt anyway. good job =) $5!

hah, i like it. seems liek alot of peoplethese days are submitted very mediocre designs.

and your not one of them! thank you for not conforming and being origional!

-taylor taylor

AWESOME!

love love love. $5

yes pretty awesome, but it sure needs color (love the color combo & effect behind the shirt at the bottom left, so I'm sure you can make something grrrreat of it!

wonderful!

Haha that's so funny. I don't even care about color but I would like to see some shaaaading.

I love the HUGE size & placement.

I also love how the face is not there-- fantastic. When I looked more closely, I realized that he's (err... should that be "He's"?) wearing a t-shirt and bracelet, which is funny. I can't decide if I like that aspect of the image or not, but it doesn't detract from my overall approval.

it's cute but the little, um, I assume skier person looks like a wonky Johnny Cupcakes logo as opposed to a skier...is it even a skier?

very cool!

When I went to the university yesterday morning the air was heavenly cold. Frosty. I made a song that went something like "I tried to paint the sky too, I tried to paint the sky - for you". And I did try. But due to the open areas in this illustration it got kind of messy, and the plain version always looked better. But as kokkaberry points out; some shading could do the trick!

Dear community; Thanx for your great comments! Love.

i think the design might be too big for the shirt. Make it smaller and i'ld love it even more.

Really enjoy this design so far, but I feel like it needs more. Color maybe? But I love where it's going $4

this is pretty cool... 5

Looks kinda plain and boring.. maybe change it up a bit and re-submit.

Lightglow could be bigger and higher... cereal box could be softer and use a little more detail... but great! needs tweaking is all... maybe a robe on God... or a funny saying on His shirt!

love the top of god's head.

Love the drawing, but I wish it had some more color or shading to make it really pop...still great, though!

With some more color and/or detail this'll be a $5 easy!