clouds maker
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1669 days ago
Submitted on:
Oct 31 '07
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19 comments
Average score:
1.96 from 1,945 votes
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I would like it better w/o the cigarette
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i like the white bird off to right, on the branch. how 'bout a shirt starring him?
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cash_ivc on Nov 01 '07 i wanna a shirt like that!
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Tonteau on Nov 01 '07 Fantastico!
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riburticus,
The cigarette is providing the smoke for the creature to blow shapes into the air. |
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me likey very muchy
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lofty softy on Nov 02 '07 this is cool
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I really loved this until I realised that it was cigarette smoke. It's just a personal thing (cigarettes killed my mom) but I know I couldn't wear a shirt that makes smoking look so elegant and harmless. Still, this is an amazing drawing, and perhaps it will not bother others.
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something about this overall design seems kind of obscene
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o.k just a perspective check... How big would that mutha beepin cig be? it'd be as tall as some of those trees... hey wait, if u want to get past all those people havin a go at the cig just turn it into a tree.
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This reminds me of Hayao Miyazaki's stuff. Very imaginative!
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FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 04 '07 That mountain's got rust breath!
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I'd give this a higher score (the art itself is well done), but I would never wear a shirt with a cigarette on it, especially not one where it makes smoking look fun.
Does that mean that it's a bad design? No. It just means that I have a personal problem with the design being based around cigarette smoking. I tried to be fair in rating this by weighing the artistic merit more heavily than my personal reaction to the cigarette. |
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At first I thought the must debated cigarette was irrelevent, but then I realized that those are smoke. It looks more like it's sucking the clouds in than blowing them out.
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for me it's all a bit tight, the hand rendered stuff doesn't sit well with the vectors, and the way you've done the lighting is a bit too ambitious and makes the idea unclear, i'd check out the amazing stuff at zeloot.nl, and just simplify your style a little.
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i love this!
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