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Pen Vomit

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Oct 30 '07
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by winkypants
This is based on a drawing by my friend Matt Logan. He and I collaborated on this to make it suitable for t-shirts. After much critique, this is the design. He calls this style of his drawings "Pen Vomit", so that only seemed fitting for the shirt.
polynothing
   polynothing on Oct 30 '07
This rocks socks! $5
loveily
loveily on Oct 30 '07
cool (:
Mojie
Mojie on Oct 30 '07
I like it on the dark grey. I probably wouldn't wear it, but it's very nice!
Caseroo
Caseroo on Oct 30 '07
i like the blue and the gray. Great job!
ladyviolett
ladyviolett on Oct 30 '07
amazing. i love that teal color with the black. $5
vanicated
vanicated on Oct 30 '07
this is fantabulous!
ajsolid84
ajsolid84 on Oct 30 '07
You need to keep it on the light color. Natural would be nice.
roadkill3d
   roadkill3d on Oct 30 '07
AWEEEEEEESOOOOOOOOME! $5 fer sure!
roadkill3d
   roadkill3d on Oct 30 '07
oh and yeah, natural ftw!
StickChick
StickChick on Oct 30 '07
really cool. $5
orwell
orwell on Oct 31 '07
awesome! i like both the dark grey and forrest.
madsg
madsg on Oct 31 '07
Others call this drawing style 'doodling'.
quasikid
quasikid on Oct 31 '07
I like the 'doodle' and the title :)
.MINUS.
.MINUS. on Oct 31 '07
This is great. Love it on the dark grey.
tarepanda
tarepanda on Oct 31 '07
Love it on teal!
loganxman
loganxman on Oct 31 '07
5 and buy or the teal!
Terrestrial_soup
Terrestrial_soup on Oct 31 '07
Thats pretty flippin sweet, definetly the cats ass. 5$
hoffster12
hoffster12 on Oct 31 '07
put it on white, itd be amaZing
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 01 '07
I concur...a 4$ if put on a light and bright color to see all the fabbo detail. I rarely enjoy doodling or randomness submissions, but this one seems to have a cohesive style that just brings this countless mass of people and body parts into one being in front of my eyes....good job on doing that.
lunchboxbrain
lunchboxbrain on Nov 01 '07
well done. 4
winkypants
winkypants on Nov 01 '07
Thanks for all the glorious feedback. i really like this shirt.



You can see all the incarnations it went through, and see why I did what I did here: http://www.threadless.com/critique/8816/Pen_Vomit
sixteynine
sixteynine on Nov 01 '07
Nice!!!! I like the colour of the girls t-shirt better but ....

$5!
staticmonkey
staticmonkey on Nov 02 '07
4
FVG
FVG on Nov 02 '07
needs a lighter tee color!
Passageiro
Passageiro on Nov 02 '07
this is so well made! $5
cloud_is_to_character
cloud_is_to_character on Nov 02 '07
BIGGER. lighter color tee. fill up the whole shirt. Awesome.
iDanSimpson
iDanSimpson on Nov 02 '07
great!
iluvtees
iluvtees on Nov 03 '07
OoO... i like the color of the girls shirt!
jakesnakes
jakesnakes on Nov 04 '07
i like it on the guys tee, but would absolutely love it on the green you used in your critique V1 and V2 :)



either way...5 big ones
Superdub
Superdub on Nov 04 '07
cool. i like.
RickHerrera
RickHerrera on Nov 06 '07
Incredible.
BeeBubble
BeeBubble on Nov 06 '07
wow! i would wear it. i like the dark teal color.
winkypants
winkypants on Nov 06 '07
THANKS TO EVERYONE WHO COMMENTED AND VOTED!
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