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Smaller Than You Think

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Oct 25 '07
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Sari.

About my design

by Sari.
What came to mind when I listened to the song...
brittencore
brittencore on Oct 25 '07
simple i like it
Sari.
Sari. on Oct 25 '07
Glad to hear it; there's a colour version in the critiques, but I panicked and put this one through 'cause I wasn't sure if I could get the colour version done on time.



Oh well, retrospect and all :)
Sari.
Sari. on Oct 25 '07
larger rez version (of both colour and plain black) to go up later today. :) I'd do it now, but I lost the colour version and work is calling.
vinnylo
vinnylo on Oct 25 '07
nice but i'm kind of noticing a lot of similar ideas throughout this contest
Raphe10
Raphe10 on Oct 25 '07
did you draw this in pencil? it looks like it, and if so, i would recommend goin over with pen so the lines look better
mizzmarvel
mizzmarvel on Oct 26 '07
A little too sketchy. The tree itself could use some more detail.
thewritewords52
thewritewords52 on Oct 26 '07
This is amazing! I love the sketching detail. It really gives this shirt a relaxing and artistic feel. $5
psyciatrist
psyciatrist on Oct 26 '07
i love the picture, but i don't think it's that's great on a t-shirt
minneshe
minneshe on Oct 27 '07
love this!
Sari.
Sari. on Oct 28 '07
thanks for the positive feedback :)



's my first sub'd design, and I would have liked to make it more solid, with less sketchy, but I'm also a pencil-and-paper girl at heart, so I also kind of like it sketchy... bah! :P
Sari.
Sari. on Oct 28 '07
I'm thinking I shouldn't have cut off the t-shirt in the display image ... I wanted to show more of the close-up, but I think it looks better if you can see the whole T.



I also edited it for myself onto someone wearing a jade colour Tee, and it looks even better, I think... but the picture of the person was taken to model someone else's design, and I'm not sure which people-wearing-threadless-Tees-colours pictures I'm able to use :P anyone know?
mca21stcen
mca21stcen on Oct 28 '07
I think this a beautiful design, and I love the style, but the drawing's just not quite there. The tree isn't very natural-looking, and the people's faces don't look very real or even that artistic.



However, upon first glance (before I started really looking at the drawing), I was in love, and would definitely give it a $5 if it was drawn just a little bit better. The idea is so cool.



It would also be better with color, I think.



Great first sub! Keep them coming.
aust1n
aust1n on Oct 29 '07
It look amazing in vector. It should be a little more symmetrical or geometrical (better circle for earth etc.)
meetmein_montaukk
meetmein_montaukk on Oct 29 '07
i love the idea that it's drawn.







:D

a 5, perhaps?

i think so.
sparklypants
sparklypants on Oct 29 '07
i like the idea of a sketch-style design, but i'm not sure that THIS one is the right one. right now, it looks a bit like someone hastily drew on a t-shirt. i think with some tweaking this idea could work out, though.
Sari.
Sari. on Oct 29 '07
yeah, with life lately, the deadline caught up and bit me in the butt... the idea's still in critiques, 'cause I *do* love the thought, and I'd like to make it good enough to deserve to be on a T. :) ('cause I want to wear it so badly! :P) right now I'm doing a full redraw on it, 'cause there's a number of things I'm not happy with having time to look at it for a few days
Fawnfruits
   Fawnfruits on Oct 30 '07
great drawing sari!
SirFrancisTyler
SirFrancisTyler on Oct 31 '07
The drawing is good, but it does not look the same to me on the shirt. The Earth looks like a bunch of pubic hair to me...
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