So this is my first design. The idea is "syngery". If you take a careful look at the "heart" hopefully you'll notice certain things about it... I'm being vague because I want to know what people interpret from the heart with out an explanation.



Please, any critique is helpful!

other colors.. and a diffrent placement please..

but it's really great :) cool idea: 4

syngery? or synergy?

I really like the design but some other colors might help. Great idea though :D

The line of people is too convoluted. It looks like it's trying to spell something if you tilt your neck to the side.

you didnt study geography

SYNERGY:

1.The interaction of two or more agents or forces so that their combined effect is greater than the sum of their individual effects

2. the cooperative action of two or more muscles, nerves, or the like



I chose these colors mostly because I thought it would be hard to conceptualize as a globe transformed into a heart, but maybe I should look into it :)



secondly... I have studied geography... probably more than you have since you haven't even finished highschool yet... but the idea behind this shirt is that North and South America, Africa, and Europe are combined in a way to create synergy (see above...) with other areas of the world (Japan, Australia, Greenland, etc..) off to the sides. If you look in the upper left hand corner you can see North America tilted almost sideways. It might help in visualizing the continents once you see that.

I think it would be interesting to see the people on the out end go all the way around the shirt and then be input again. This might also help with you idea of synergy, as it has to become cyclical to continue to work. Good idea, and I agree with the color change idea, the green is rather bright.

mayhemem i think that is a brilliant idea to improve this great concept. i think the colours are good, however, they could be a little potent? the green is very limey if you know what I mean... Also, i am taking issue with the valves of the heart.. i don't like the lines on them much, and generally they just seem --- wierd? i love the concept, and the execution turned out pretty well, but i think a few tweaks got make it amazing.

i'm into it! $5

So wait, is Australia anti-synergy?

i love the idea! i also think it'd rock if you could have the entire design wrap around the shirt so the people come back to be inputted. i like the colors!

Yeah! Australia should be in on the fun times, too!



Like the design, but am not a fan of the green that you've used - it's a little too bright for the concept I think.

:)

thanks for all the ideas guys :) I was considering using different shades of green for each "chamber" of the heart in more natural colors... it sounds like that would have been a good idea? also the wrap around idea is great! I'd also like to change the style of the people at this point. It is even possible to re-submit? I'm not quite sure how this works

I love it. ^^

I say it's greenland!

Would buy it for sure..... I think the vibrant heart is cool, it gives a good green feeling and stands out where your heart really is....



really good ^^^^



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Pangeeeeah! (Kinda)

Way cool.