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Very good concept but needs to be illustrated better. Give the characters more of a feeling of movement, put some film in the camera reels, and maybe have them in a pit of battle or something?
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I love the idea, but I don't feel like they are fighting. They look more scared. I think it's the wide eyes.
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Not enough going on I don't think. FRICKINAWESOME's suggestion of putting film in the reels is good, maybe it could be flowing out or something?
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Great idea! Movies almost always ruin books for me. I would like this a lot better if it looked more realistic.
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About my design
Here is the moment right before the battle begins so that you can decide for yourself which side wins.
7/15 for october
enjoy!