Hi, i decide to rework this design, thinking i could dig the concept and fix the stuff bothering people at the time...i also tried to make a more real impactant lung than the previous version.

I hope you'll like it as i enjoyed reworking it :-)

oh good :D

Love it...

didn't see the original, but love this

waaaaaaaaay better and awesome!

thanks :-)

i thought that the other version, even if it had a great final score deserved a better and most complicated textured render...i saw the previous one and immediatly said: too clean! lacks of depth! and reading again the comments...well, i thought: here we go again, it deserved it :-)

if you want to see the forst version, that's here: click here to see my first version

wow! this is awesome!

sick as can be

I like the rework. The halftone really adds to it.

this is awesome! i don't usually like the organ ones, but this is fantastic!

Looks great 5$

This is Amazing!!! 5$ Fo Shizzle

Both versions are good, but this one is clearly better. Good revision. $5.

Great!

i love it, much better than the first :) 5$

amazing job!
FTW!

Beautiful!

thanks everybody, i'm pleased that a lot of people liked my rework...that's the beauty of vectors, we can always rework, improve, find new ideas, solutions on a design we didn't have at the time...things you can't do in drawing or painting, that's pretty exciting in fact :-)

awesome!

Amazing work!

halftones make this shirt for me $5

WOAH this makes sence.

thanks again ^^

in a way i like the other one better, but this is still pretty cool.

you weren't happy with a 2.81? i'd be happy to break 2...

you are the first one to prefer a bit the previous one ^^
Anyway, i was the happiest man of the world when i saw the score, it was my best at the time!!!! but i was not happy with the whole work recently, seeing it again...right now, i'm really satisfied with this new work, so i guess it worths it ;-)

one of the best i've seen so far

This is very Al Novasord.

looks great

definite 5$

Both are great, but I like how you reworked it... the halftones give it a nice, polluted glow. :) $5

Excellent ! - Lung Tees are the new Heart Tees !

thanks! i agree, the halftones give an effect that the previous version lacked a bit ;-)

haha! pretty stuff! + superb job! 5$! :)

Be a trailblazer, start the spleen tees!

I took a look at the last one, this is an improvement, without a doubt.

By the by, you really should be commended for your choice in comics. Calvin and Hobbes is the e-pit-o-me.

thanks you two! and yeah i LOVE Watterson comics ;-)
2.91 is just excellent!!! i am happy that people found a REAL improvment in this design. See you!

This sure looks great!