Please Miss, Please Miss...
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Oct 18 '07
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Ok this isn't bad but here is my constructive criticism. The typography is bad. I think if you used your comment the whole "Dear God" thing it would of worked better with the right font or hand drawn letters. Also the golf club seems just cut off, that part need some work.
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I think it's a nice idea. I don't think you need to worry about the typography too much but I do agree that the club shouldn't be cut off like that. I would extend it all the way up to the shoulder. I think that'd look nice
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The golf T is huge
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Recognizable font, be creative with it
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I'd like it if the ball was thinking, "Dear God!" Haha.
I think the club handle needs to be extended, too. |
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hard to tell if that is a face on the ball, or just wierd looking dimples
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Move the graphic down (all the way to the bottm maybe?) to include most golfclub, and I agree with Hi My Name Is - the plea to god is funnier than repeating "please miss".
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I like the typewriter thing... especially since the words actually continue beyond the edges of the bubble. I think it's cool. Good job!
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er......no
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haha fair enough on the ditto - i was a little unfair (a bad mood cloud hovering at the exact moment i clicked) - so il try and right the wrong - generally im not a big fan of this kind of cartoon style on tees but thats just taste, however i do feel that the thought cloud and contained type isnt right, please miss works but perhaps in a hand-drawn font as suggested by 'hi my name is'
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I like that in the middle of the the little dents (is there a technical term for them?) kinda look like a frowning face hee hee :]
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i agree ... just "Dear God ... "
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this is great with either recommended text but a different font would be better
I would buy this |
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there is a market out there for this - it's not my thing... but.
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