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Oct 22 '07
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JeffTerry

About my design

by JeffTerry
Here it is! Thanks to everyone for the critiques along the way. Sorry I wasn't able to implement them all, nevertheless I am happy with the finished product.
maxattack
maxattack on Oct 22 '07
great job!
maxattack
maxattack on Oct 22 '07
try a different bakground colour
cookiesarefun
cookiesarefun on Oct 22 '07
I agree, at least on the girl's tee. Otherwise a very neat design!
Momentarily
Momentarily on Oct 22 '07
This is wonderful! I'd like it best on brown.
Pookiepookstar
Pookiepookstar on Oct 22 '07
Yes, great on brown!
JeffTerry
JeffTerry on Oct 22 '07
Yea it would definitely be availabe on brown for girls, maybe also a light blue for either or. Thanks for looking!
ldtod
ldtod on Oct 22 '07
One of the best I've seen on this site. Great job. I like the brown shirt the best- maybe even a dark blue would look nice as well! I hope you win- I want one of these!
NvrStr8AlwysFwrd
NvrStr8AlwysFwrd on Oct 22 '07
Lovely. I actually like the yellow.
Solidstu
Solidstu on Oct 22 '07
How could you not like this shirt?

If it were my design I would add more detail to the bows in her hair.

But maybe you did that on purpose? Ha ha isn't being an artist great? No one can tell you your wrong. : )
growlme
growlme on Oct 22 '07
I love this especially on brown! great job.
Willish
Willish on Oct 22 '07
I like it more on the brown but I think both colours work.

Design wise this is unique and detailed also well executed.
Ichigo23
Ichigo23 on Oct 22 '07
Amazing Job, i love the creativity.
bradleydeant
bradleydeant on Oct 22 '07
pretty cool there jeff real good design
howdyrockerbaby
howdyrockerbaby on Oct 22 '07
I can't figure out why she's trying to put a yellow piece in a part of the puzzle that is definately all blue. Perhaps i'm missing the point though. Other than that I think its really great.
Caseroo
Caseroo on Oct 22 '07
yeah, brown definitely looks best, the yellow shirt looks kind of off with the blue puzzle
jentheamericanblonde
jentheamericanblonde on Oct 22 '07
Please, no yellow for the girls tee. I love this shirt, but I don't like the yellow. I'd buy it if it came in brown for girls.
JeffTerry
JeffTerry on Oct 23 '07
definitely would be brown for both sexes, popular opinion seems to be for the brown which I originally designed it for, I just threw in the yellow to give options.
Chris Carney
Chris Carney on Oct 23 '07
Good Luck 5£
mizzmarvel
mizzmarvel on Oct 23 '07
She has tiny arms.
phyntosia
phyntosia on Oct 23 '07
Another vote for brown :)
tobasco
tobasco on Oct 23 '07
WOW! Really cool detail here. Solid work



If it was on light blue it would melt into the T-shirt even more, which could look super duper!



Either way mate $5!
silverstar8403
silverstar8403 on Oct 24 '07
Her right hand is in a weird position. Really clever idea, though!
FVG
FVG on Oct 24 '07
I like brown because it's dark and the lightblue pieces really stand out...



well done!
daisiesareyellow
daisiesareyellow on Oct 24 '07
i really like the placement. 5
axe_battler
axe_battler on Oct 24 '07
I love it. Well done! $5
nonplussed
nonplussed on Oct 24 '07
Super, especially on the brown background! $5 for sure.
goodtimes5123
goodtimes5123 on Oct 24 '07
Great design idea. Though where's her nose? And her body looks out of shape.. distorted.
Sunkaiyi
Sunkaiyi on Oct 24 '07
I think the arms look fine-the design looks awesome! That's ace.

$5
freshview
freshview on Oct 24 '07
she looks completely out of proportion to me. Her head is way too big for her body and her arms are too short, her hands are too small. Not sure if you were going for this or not...
JeffTerry
JeffTerry on Oct 26 '07
freshview, you already said that in my critiques page, to which I already responded that I wasn't going for complete realism and was happy with how it turned out. I am always open for critiques but please listen to responses rather then posting the same thing again.
judas_mordred
judas_mordred on Oct 26 '07
I like the yellow best. And please don't put it on light blue, because then you won't be able to see the design very well.
Ashley Ann
Ashley Ann on Oct 26 '07
great use of imagination. i'd definitely buy this shirt... and i'm really picky.
hellosunshine1
hellosunshine1 on Oct 28 '07
$5 I like the brown best
football88
football88 on Oct 28 '07
I'd buy it.

FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Oct 29 '07
I love puzzles and clever puzzle tees, and you've got both on this one. I don't mind the out of proportionism on this one. Really nice placement and the only puzzle shirt i want more than this is "shiver Me Timbers" which is just unbelievable. But this one is really interesting and emotional but not tear-jerky in its own way. 4$ on brown.
JeffTerry
JeffTerry on Oct 29 '07
Thanks everyone for looking, you guys rock!
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