Wrong Ball
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Oct 18 '07
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My submission for "keep your eye on the ball."
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Torakamikaze on Oct 18 '07 no to the windows! and the weird lined floor bothers me
but the rest is pretty awesome |
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agreed ^
i love the flashlight effect... |
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yea...gotta lose the windows. and maybe try it on a black shirt so the shadows blend in. otherwise, pretty sweet!
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Love the concept. I think the windows would work if you changed the curtains (the fluffy sheer pink looks a bit too "grandma's bathroom" for a ball) and I think some of the line work could be cleaned up a little. Agree that the lined floor is a bit weird. But, really, just a couple of tweaks and I'd definitely buy it!
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I was going to put a chandelier up top, but I put windows. smart guy, huh. thanks for the input though.
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Interesting concept. Windows are ok but make them big down to the ground. And i really dont like the colors, what about other colors versions + more colors? 3 for now.
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actually, there are four colors:
1 light blue, 2 dark blue 3 light red, 4 dark red 5 black |
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Five colors, i mean
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great design. drop the windows.
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Dislike the windows, other than that it's a pretty good idea
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Peering under a lady's skirt? Hm, she should look way more po'ed. -windows, +chandeliers, fix the floor. Cute idea.
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cool illo!
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i agree with Torakamikaze.
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hahaha
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like the concept... windows & floor do make take away from impact.
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Favourite sub for this contest so far. Its different!
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take out windows!
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If I had had time to wash this in the critique area, I would have. So, as unfortunate as these windows may be, for what I know, there is no way to trash em'. If this weren't a sub for a particular contest, I'm sure I could get away w/ altering it and resubmitting it.
Anyway, thanks. |
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Man o Man; the floor thing really was a bad decision. meh.
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I like the windows I think they add perspective, the floor could do with some adjusting but I think the design is very unique and the execution is off to a great start.
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I really like this interpretation of this contest I think it's really original I think the windows distrac from the concept and if you win they should be taken out but I still really like it so $5
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this is really funny. I won't harp on your windows because it's already been said. I personally don't like the colors at all, but I love the illustration.
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whahahaha... that's such a funny illustration: the expressions are just fantastic!!
Windows are so so, and I also don't like the outline of the illustration that much: it's still abit of a black blob on the shirt. Maybe do more with negative space, like the flashlight to blend it in with the shirt color..? A resubmission could become a winner! |
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The windows must stay! Maybe they could go all the way to the floor, but I the windows are a very good part of the shirt!
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I renegade! I like all these things I did.
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cash_ivc on Oct 24 '07 its the better t!
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