the idea is interesting to me (red baron as Icon) but the execution needs some work. Try a different germanic type face, something with a thicker stroke. prioritze the different elements. right now they are all the same size and they're fighting each other. I'd blow up the face and use the iron cross as a secondary element. The plane could also be shrunk down.
I like the idea, just keep working on the design and resubmit.
I like the idea, just keep working on the design and resubmit.