Lunchbreak
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1685 days ago
Submitted on:
Oct 16 '07
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Average score:
2.23 from 1,918 votes
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很好看
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I nearly scored this without looking @ it properly ( not that I would have scored it lowly anyway ). Superb. Truly
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Love the textures ... nice work $5
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love how clean the design is, and the angle of the trees, pretty much everything about this :)
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why apples in the tree? Might work better if it's cherry blossom - more Japanese
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Apples in the tree pretty much for the same reason a geisha is eating pizza. This obviously isn't ancient Japan, or even pre-war Japan, at least not in my mind... it's just your run-of-the-mill modern day geisha on her lunchbreak.
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awesome. bruce looks really nice in that green
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XD Haha, I love it. It made me laugh, I'd buy. $5! The artwork is very nice and smooth, keep up the great work.
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ahaha. a geisha eating pizza? interesting.
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lol@bruce
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FRICKINAWESOME on Oct 17 '07 Odd shirt model. Odd idea. Odd everything about this. But somehow it all fits together quite nicely in a way that's pleasing and fulfilling. Hence the magic of far-out ideas getting it right.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Oct 17 '07 Oh, but i'd still like a little ore detail on the tree.
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nice - I love the colors :)
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I love the design: the Geisha's face, the flow, the colors. However, I had no idea what she was eating until I read the comments. Perhaps make it more pizza-y?
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hmm... interesting point. It had not occurred to me but I will modify accordingly
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fantastic design. Loose the flash.
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I wouldn't change the pizza. I don't know how you couldn't tell - especially with the pizza box on her lap.
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I like the pizza as is. The rest of the design is so clean I think it would be too much detail on the pizza.
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What color is that green and why don't they ever use it?
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i wish it would quit jumping around, but i love the linework.
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How about some pepperoni on the pizza? Doesn't really 'read' as a pizza slice right off the bat.
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Yeah, the pizza needs a bit more detail. mushrooms, olives, whatever.
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haha, that's funny, I went back in last night and added just those: mushrooms and olives.... but then I took them off again this morning. I just didn't feel like they added anything. I did refine the lines a bit. Now I think I'm done, though, it's time to move on to other art.
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I lol'd $5 very nice artwork too, maybe some differnt colors.
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$5!! awesome colors, great design!
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this is great! hahahaha. and i disagree about losing the flash. u gotta see the closeup, and its way better than trying to cram everything into the frame in one shot. if i could use flash, i would do this. it does change a lil' fast for me tho...
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I like it, but agreed --had no idea it was pizza until I read the comments--looks octopussy(can i say that?) the way it squiggles and splits into two--And perhaps, because the gif is changing so quickly and because of my pizza ignorance, I couldnt figure out that was a pizza box-In that glimpse, it appeared to be behind her and I couldnt understand what the strange angular thing was--Due to coloration and position of it, I was assuming it was part of the stylized tree base....Maybe, its just me...or maybe its just 'flashing' too fast...or maybe theres some subjectivity involved...
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