I think the middle one should say "he's been laternized!" I agree it's wierd with the other one's having faces too, but you don't realize that unless it's pointed out. Plus, if the jokes about the pumpkin being laternized, then it moots the other point.
I like some of the ideas like vomiting pumpkin seeds, candled versus candless, pumpkins with opinons. But the joke about 'what happened to you " doesn't work for me.
If you've already had your guts removed, you cant vomit your guts. if you've already had a face carved into you, and lived, it doesn't matter much if there's also a candle in there.
Comedy is technical, comedians are deadly serious people. Since the problem was with the joke, not the art, feedback could be valuable. Good wishes with your piece.
really like it! My first inpression was they were all on drugs. Mr. Left can't handle em, Mr. Middle is freakin' out and Mr. Right is having an awesome time! :D
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theurbanraptor
Poor Frank...
they scooped out his brains and laternized him...
Maltzmania
hahahah nice
snuffle
Great. :) I love the expression on the middle pumpkins face.
CLGrovo
That made me laugh for a while, nice.
WarDrobeInSpareOom
Add projectile vomiting to gourds, and you get awesomeness, apparently.
I love the far left one's hands.
melmonkey
:) not for me but I have buds who would love it
GreenGourd
Pumpkin vomit—wow!
potatopotpi
i would like it with the title as text ... :D
SUPERxDUPER
I like this, but I don't like the placement.
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Pixtoons
The other two should not have carved out faces. It ruins the joke.
FRICKINAWESOME
I think the middle one should say "he's been laternized!" I agree it's wierd with the other one's having faces too, but you don't realize that unless it's pointed out. Plus, if the jokes about the pumpkin being laternized, then it moots the other point.
theurbanraptor
i thought of that. but i only have one with the top cut and candle in him.
silverstar8403
do you mean "lanternized?"
theurbanraptor
doesn't matter how i spell it.
its not on the shirt.
TheBlackBastard
ahahah, this is hilarious!
mlnewco
awesome love your series
jackiejacktoo
I like some of the ideas like vomiting pumpkin seeds, candled versus candless, pumpkins with opinons. But the joke about 'what happened to you " doesn't work for me.
If you've already had your guts removed, you cant vomit your guts. if you've already had a face carved into you, and lived, it doesn't matter much if there's also a candle in there.
theurbanraptor
way to get too technical.
yue kitty
I agree lighten up!! This is an awsome shirt! 5!!!!!
sublimate
i would wear this even if it wasn't halloween. i love it so much, thank you for making me laugh. the expression on the middle one is priceless.
Yrie
i love the idea, but i think the ones still living shouldnt look so alike the dead one.
ya_rly
lol. "lanternized" is definately essential. and the living ones look just fine with faces, its like every other animal on the earth...
$5!
jackiejacktoo
Comedy is technical, comedians are deadly serious people. Since the problem was with the joke, not the art, feedback could be valuable. Good wishes with your piece.
Anarchy21
Ditto everyone else. Concept is awesome. Just fine tune some stuff and this'll be awesome.
Guppy75
really like it! My first inpression was they were all on drugs. Mr. Left can't handle em, Mr. Middle is freakin' out and Mr. Right is having an awesome time! :D
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