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Pretentious

by Néhérénia
Pretentious

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Submitted by Néhérénia on October 9, 2007

Pretentious Bird !!!

Néhérénia
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Pretentious Bird !!!

WEContact

This is pretty. You get a 4, although the pretension thing doesn't really come across.

dmadamx

i wish there were more birdies on the lower branches...but still nicely done...

chlobo107

Looks like that tree from The Lion King. But instead of Rafiki, it's a yellow bird with a sunburst around its head. Hm.

L.T.
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I think this is like a combination of two over-done things on this site: A lone, monochromatic plant, and a cutesy, colorful sprite. Surprisingly, the combination of the two creates a wonderful contrast, and makes a beautiful design.

joanneharland

Tree trunk seems to thick and out of proportion for me

mj00

This is the third sub of yours that uses that same exact tree drawing. The only reason I can recognize it so easily is that it is so weirdly proportioned. I'd suggest that if the tree didn't get printed last time, you might want to improve it rather than just adding and subtracting birds. The tree's a weird size that doesn't lend itself to being on a shirt.

pearlaceoushecticity

i second that the tree trunk is strangely proportioned... enough to make it something i wouldn't wear.

marskinis

Look, I like the fine details of the tree, the neat solarized effect it creates. You've obviously put some time and heart into this. Unfortunately, I feel like the bird is lost. It doesn't share focus with the tree. You have to remind yourself that this is a t-shirt design (not a static painting) and therefore you are working on a malable, constantly folding canvas. The bird won't be noticable unless the wearer is standing completely still and flat. Yet the bird, in my humble opinion, is the most important element in your design.

stupefie

The bird didn't catch my attention at all and for a while I was thinking what's pretentious all about? Maybe enlarging the bird or resizing the tree helps.

Kalikali

Kill the birdy. It's too cute, but I like the tree.

erin_everlasting

i like it ok, but i think your colour choices are gross and dont bring the design out enough.

ammiteir

Too much white, otherwise okay.

EclecticEccentric

I think I would like it more if the tree trunk was longer and thinner. And, what is with the change of style? The bird and the tree are done too differently, the bird seems like a paper cutout on a drawn tree, and not in the best way.

anonymous

I like it, too. The bird shouldn't be so high, though, unless that had to do with the idea. I think some goofy looking apple would be cool, too.

anonymous

instead of the bird

mel_mel

i like the etched look of the tree juxtaposed against the cute bird perhced way up high

wheizers

i like the tree, but not sure i like the cartoony bird

blumnk

you got a perfect 4,wich is my highest score.

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