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Submitted on:
Oct 11 '07
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Final average score:
2.35 out of 5
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Néhérénia
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Pretentious Bird !!!
WEContact
WEContact on Oct 11 '07
This is pretty. You get a 4, although the pretension thing doesn't really come across.
dmadamx
dmadamx on Oct 11 '07
i wish there were more birdies on the lower branches...but still nicely done...
chlobo107
chlobo107 on Oct 11 '07
Looks like that tree from The Lion King. But instead of Rafiki, it's a yellow bird with a sunburst around its head. Hm.
L.T.
L.T. on Oct 11 '07
I think this is like a combination of two over-done things on this site: A lone, monochromatic plant, and a cutesy, colorful sprite. Surprisingly, the combination of the two creates a wonderful contrast, and makes a beautiful design.
joanneharland
joanneharland on Oct 11 '07
Tree trunk seems to thick and out of proportion for me
mj00
mj00 on Oct 11 '07
This is the third sub of yours that uses that same exact tree drawing. The only reason I can recognize it so easily is that it is so weirdly proportioned. I'd suggest that if the tree didn't get printed last time, you might want to improve it rather than just adding and subtracting birds. The tree's a weird size that doesn't lend itself to being on a shirt.
pearlaceoushecticity
pearlaceoushecticity on Oct 11 '07
i second that the tree trunk is strangely proportioned... enough to make it something i wouldn't wear.
marskinis
marskinis on Oct 11 '07
Look, I like the fine details of the tree, the neat solarized effect it creates. You've obviously put some time and heart into this. Unfortunately, I feel like the bird is lost. It doesn't share focus with the tree. You have to remind yourself that this is a t-shirt design (not a static painting) and therefore you are working on a malable, constantly folding canvas. The bird won't be noticable unless the wearer is standing completely still and flat. Yet the bird, in my humble opinion, is the most important element in your design.
stupefie
stupefie on Oct 12 '07
The bird didn't catch my attention at all and for a while I was thinking what's pretentious all about? Maybe enlarging the bird or resizing the tree helps.
Kalikali
Kalikali on Oct 12 '07
Kill the birdy. It's too cute, but I like the tree.
SWAMPFACTORY
   SWAMPFACTORY on Oct 12 '07
pretentious ?
erin_everlasting
erin_everlasting on Oct 12 '07
i like it ok, but i think your colour choices are gross and dont bring the design out enough.
ammiteir
ammiteir on Oct 13 '07
Too much white, otherwise okay.
EclecticEccentric
EclecticEccentric on Oct 14 '07
I think I would like it more if the tree trunk was longer and thinner. And, what is with the change of style? The bird and the tree are done too differently, the bird seems like a paper cutout on a drawn tree, and not in the best way.
simplyjenna
simplyjenna on Oct 15 '07
I like it.
anonymous
anonymous on Oct 15 '07
I like it, too. The bird shouldn't be so high, though, unless that had to do with the idea. I think some goofy looking apple would be cool, too.
anonymous
anonymous on Oct 15 '07
instead of the bird
mel_mel
mel_mel on Oct 16 '07
i like the etched look of the tree juxtaposed against the cute bird perhced way up high
wheizers
wheizers on Oct 16 '07
i like the tree, but not sure i like the cartoony bird
blumnk
blumnk on Oct 17 '07
you got a perfect 4,wich is my highest score.
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