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Oct 11 '07
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This has two versions, I know a lot of people say no text so the version on the right has no text.

The design should work on any color except a really dark
t-shirt.

Hope you enjoy.
SoulfumeInc
SoulfumeInc on Oct 11 '07
definitely projects the same message without the text!
Zacynthus
Zacynthus on Oct 11 '07
yeah i think it looks better w/o the text
Ruadhan
Ruadhan on Oct 11 '07
I will buy this if it's on a different colour. Though it does look good on white.
Krakaboom
   Krakaboom on Oct 11 '07
Your thumbnail was incredible!
nikolina100
nikolina100 on Oct 11 '07
this is pretty cool
dmadamx
dmadamx on Oct 11 '07
like it...but the bird looks like it's on a stick.
jaxvii
jaxvii on Oct 11 '07
no text
Fluos
Fluos on Oct 11 '07
no text = £5 :D
Kirby_02
Kirby_02 on Oct 11 '07
i like the text... but i can see people telling me what band is that.
mlrasche
mlrasche on Oct 11 '07
looks like a dream theater album
iDanSimpson
iDanSimpson on Oct 11 '07
ltt
skoticus
skoticus on Oct 12 '07
better w/o text
Bonse
Bonse on Oct 12 '07
I don't know why, but I like it. w/o text, of course.
Rach101
Rach101 on Oct 12 '07
yep, definitely without text, cool idea
JAYGATZ
JAYGATZ on Oct 12 '07
this looks like band merch. Which is not a bad thing at all. Nice work! Looks great on a tee.
SM Designs
SM Designs on Oct 12 '07
Thanks for all the comments. Here is a version with alternate shirt colors and the legs on the bird a little more realistic.
www.threadless.com/critique/8543/Urban_Nature

just in case that doesnt work,
http://www.threadless.com/critique/8543/Urban_Nature
j_bro
j_bro on Oct 12 '07
i absolutly love this shirt, i prefer it without the text, but it doesnt bother me... the only thing i would change is that i would strecth the light post a little further across the chest rather than have the signal hanging d4own the exact center... it would help the balance of the shirt... $5
shoesfornoone
shoesfornoone on Oct 12 '07
i want one...one without text
mezo
   mezo on Oct 12 '07
I am all for subtle deign, but think your perspective here is way off. The bird, when/if printed at actual size looks like it'd be like 1/2" wide- way too small for a shirt design. The idea is there, but execution is off. 3
MooseDinner
MooseDinner on Oct 13 '07
Yeah, the bird is really small.
GreenGourd
GreenGourd on Oct 13 '07
The text is crucial!
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on Oct 14 '07
the Bird should be bigger, and the whole image shifted a maybe bit to the right. you don't want the bird to get lost in the armpit!
annaleah
annaleah on Oct 15 '07
no text! Grey shirt is good. sky-like blue would be v. good too
SM Designs
SM Designs on Oct 15 '07
If this actually gets printed I promise too makethe bird bigger if they will let me
jiffybesmooth
jiffybesmooth on Oct 15 '07
i love without the text. Grey would be sweet.
anoidiona
anoidiona on Oct 15 '07
i actually like the text...
cntrygrlie
cntrygrlie on Oct 16 '07
I like this shirt. Very cool
StormPelican
StormPelican on Oct 17 '07
I think the bird is supposed to look like its on a stick, I like the shirt.
mercurycrossing
mercurycrossing on Oct 17 '07
It does make me think of Dream Theater. And yeah, without the text I dig it.
SM Designs
SM Designs on Oct 19 '07
Thank for all the comments
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