that's a bit harsh. I think it works fine without the title. the steam implies there's something delicious there, but there's nothing at all! I love it.
I don't think it works without the title ether I thought the thing steaming was the container and I was like giant marshmallow?? but I really like the drawing none the less
i stand by my statement that it doesn't work without the title. i don't think the steam makes up for lack of clarity in the illustration. the steam does imply "warm food", but definitely does not say "invisible biscuits." it could easily be interpreted as a hot sandwich, a giant marshmallow, a slice of cheese. i see no problem with adding the title in, set in an almost cheesy, grandma-ish font.
this sketch was compiled from many stories and fond memories, it may not be exactly right, but we agreed it was pretty darn close.
thanks for taking a look.
yeah and I thought it was an invisible sandwich until I read the title. With the title it is funny though, but i wouldn't want text on the shirt. I am confusing myself
my15in10
wait, i SEE THEM!
nikolina100
awww, another cute one :)
renfrue
yummers
ANCHORESSE
this doesn't even remotely work without the title. good illustration though.
lemonalle
mah favorite!
shakethesheets
that's a bit harsh. I think it works fine without the title. the steam implies there's something delicious there, but there's nothing at all! I love it.
I_live_for_tweek
I don't think it works without the title ether I thought the thing steaming was the container and I was like giant marshmallow?? but I really like the drawing none the less
shakethesheets
When will we see a corey print???? This would make a lovely first!
professorE
I read the title and thought of grandma farting. I must need help of some sort of help.
helo
that brown whip-like thing looks like a loooong hair or a whip . . like . . . thing
PonderThis
I'm confused.
RantAGirl
trippy
herky
intoxicating aroma, funny stuff.
lunchboxbrain
smells good from here. 5
ANCHORESSE
i stand by my statement that it doesn't work without the title. i don't think the steam makes up for lack of clarity in the illustration. the steam does imply "warm food", but definitely does not say "invisible biscuits." it could easily be interpreted as a hot sandwich, a giant marshmallow, a slice of cheese. i see no problem with adding the title in, set in an almost cheesy, grandma-ish font.
shakethesheets
mmm hot slice of invisible cheese
chelly
great
igo2cairo
nice style... but I'm confused too...
Davathefluffyandpale
WHAT????
corey9
this sketch was compiled from many stories and fond memories, it may not be exactly right, but we agreed it was pretty darn close.
thanks for taking a look.
foxbat
8)
FRICKINAWESOME
ahh, just like Grandma used to not make them.
spiderflux
this has a homey feel i'm not into, nothing personal. but- i like the style quite alot and it's well done, good luck.
BlueStar26
I find this moderately hilarious... no i mean fuckin hilarious... I love wind biscuits!
angelito
love...
GreenGourd
This design needs text.
sleepingsheep118
on a different color maybe?
chlobo107
"...and invisible grandma"?!?
Merzi
yeah and I thought it was an invisible sandwich until I read the title. With the title it is funny though, but i wouldn't want text on the shirt. I am confusing myself
corey9
last couple/few hours on this?
thanks for all the votes and comments!
corey9
its a great morning for biscuits.
shakethesheets
yes!
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