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doodle me the sky

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Oct 04 '07
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bloo-zoo

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Is this better than this one?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/8250/Paint_Me_the_Sky



What can I do to improve it?
NoodleJersey
NoodleJersey on Oct 04 '07
yes. well, i like it better without the brush... i think it was distracting, this is really cute & simple.
pearlaceoushecticity
pearlaceoushecticity on Oct 04 '07
i'd sratch up the sky more
C.A.Philips
C.A.Philips on Oct 05 '07
the upper part is too square...
bearsrock
bearsrock on Oct 05 '07
Yep, more scratchy, less square... I like v much $5
tarae21
tarae21 on Oct 05 '07
I like this piece alot! awsome job! I wouldn't change it!
farlen
farlen on Oct 05 '07
Maybe if the paint was dripping?
nessquik_bunny
nessquik_bunny on Oct 05 '07
Oh this is nice.



Like the other person said, have a bit more paint dripping ? But not too much tho.



Still, very nice.
minneshe
minneshe on Oct 05 '07
ok cool concept, but i don't like how its just a swuare in the middle of the shirt... maybe relocate?
Momentarily
Momentarily on Oct 05 '07
Instead of a square, make it scribbles. I love the rest though :)
2 days later
Merzi
Merzi on Oct 07 '07
I really like it, scribbles and all.
dancerchica0404
dancerchica0404 on Oct 07 '07
awesome...I love it!
shoesfornoone
shoesfornoone on Oct 08 '07
I think perhaps to make it more stringy then drippy. I really like how it almost looks like the strings are holding the clouds up.
Silverstars_07
Silverstars_07 on Oct 08 '07
make it less boxy around the top, and it will be awesome! $5
Meech
Meech on Oct 10 '07
Brush version is inferior. Mess up the box shape at the top.
artzegrrl
artzegrrl on Oct 10 '07
Much better without the brush.
Queenlurline
Queenlurline on Oct 10 '07
I love THIS one.
neverEnding
neverEnding on Oct 11 '07
i really like it, but the top should be more random, rather than just looking although it's filling up a sheet.
i know very little about art
   i know very little about art on Oct 11 '07
nice design!
159 days later
lepredikateur
lepredikateur on Mar 19 '08
i really digg this one
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