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i agree with tangy.
i see what you are doing there, but it could be better if he was falling back or if it was a bit more clear that he just got blazed. great idea though. |
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nah no falling back... its perfect the way it is, just, like tangy said, and a bit of blood and its perfect
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Lovin' the style...but I agree with above comments, a lil blood couldn't hurt...then it would definitely be considered a 5!!!
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No blood. Just make the graphic on the machine bigger. It took a while to figure out what he was doing. But once I saw the gunslinger, it made complete sense. Great illustration.
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subtle color would be nice somewhere. maybe his stripes? something like that. otherwise, i really like it.
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I agree with above - a little blood would be good, I too thought at first that he was too cool for the game.
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