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iPhone by Elbeardo

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364 days ago

Submitted on:

Oct 02 '07

Scored by:

1,904 people

Comments:

35 comments

Final average score:

1.87 out of 5

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iribe on Oct 02 '07

like the colours you picked but that is about it... sorry

gollysandra on Oct 02 '07

oh man, i think this is fantastic.

mindtrance on Oct 02 '07

isn't that a record player?

Elbeardo on Oct 02 '07

gramaphone

azoetrope on Oct 02 '07

I am so sad that this will probably have a copyright issue. Because I would totally wear it.

Elbeardo on Oct 02 '07

There shouldn't be a copyright issue. iPhone is just what i called the design. The text does not appear on the shirt. (unless Apple have copyrighted silhouettes now)

_Avarice_ on Oct 02 '07

I like it, but I have a suggestion...sorta. The Apple silhouettes are always just black with the product being white. So, for me the gray chair and table, insignificant as this might seem, throw me off. I don't know if there's a way to eliminate that color or even the furniture all together, but for me that'd be an improvement.

And, maybe if you had a 4 square grid with those bright colors, instead of one solid background I'd like it even more. Good concept, I would like to see it rehashed.

pendulum_and_fire on Oct 02 '07

lol, the first iPhone.

Wetbo on Oct 02 '07

funny, but I think the image should be smaller.

hanzabean on Oct 02 '07

"(unless Apple have copyrighted silhouettes now)"

hehe. he

I don't think that I would buy this, but I really like the idea. I think. Maybe it's the top hat. and Lincoln...

christi104hsia on Oct 02 '07

I like Avarice's idea "And, maybe if you had a 4 square grid with those bright colors, instead of one solid background I'd like it even more. Good concept, I would like to see it rehashed.

jellyfish123 on Oct 02 '07

I get the feeling that the concept wouldn't work as well without the iPhone text being there... problem is, if your design corresponds too easily to the idea of Apple's iPods and iPhone, etc. products, you could still find yourself with some copyright issues.

Basically, either you have to sacrifice the effect of your concept for fear of being sued for copyright... or you have to increase the satirical content of your design so as to avoid copyright issues.

Perrie on Oct 03 '07

I dig it as is, on the electric pink background. $5 and buy. I want one so bad!

JoeyRun on Oct 03 '07

love all the colours, you've done well

Elbeardo on Oct 03 '07

To those who love it, thanks for your votes!
Those who don't, thanks for your comments, I'll take the suggestions on board for my next design. I won't make any changes to this one though, because I like it how it is.

Thank you voters for getting me past the 24 hour mark this time! :D

Jemae on Oct 03 '07

yes, this is an invention!..and that should be the first iphone! hehehe! cool idea + funny stuff, man! :)

jaz999 on Oct 03 '07

maybe gPhone. I'm adverse to the iGeneration

FVG on Oct 03 '07

"grama" phone.... that is just a great pun! Maybe use that as a text..!

asfi235 on Oct 03 '07

But...it's not a phone.

deliciouscarebear21 on Oct 03 '07

I like this one a lot.

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Elbeardo on Oct 04 '07

Thanks for your votes guys

lemonalle on Oct 04 '07

nice job!

harley22 on Oct 04 '07

This design is super cool.
Thumbs up.

Elbeardo on Oct 05 '07

Thanks Lemonalle and Harley, glad you like it!

bandontherun on Oct 06 '07

Love this shirt, especially on the green or blue

Elbeardo on Oct 06 '07

Thanks bandontherun, the green is my favourite too.

Elbeardo on Oct 07 '07

2 more days! Thanks for your votes.

--GEORGiA on Oct 07 '07

Nice ;]

silentreason on Oct 07 '07

I love this idea, but I agree with Avarice, they grey objects take away from "iphone" idea.

thefloormat on Oct 07 '07

i agree with avarice also, but would still buy as is. nice work!

} belonax { on Oct 08 '07

This is clever and funny, but not 100% on the mark. It relies too heavily on copyright material (iPhone) and the silhouette is too distinguishable as Abe Lincoln. The color choices and execution are pretty good. Best of luck.