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Teddy Bear Picnic

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Ruadhan

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by Ruadhan
If you go into the woods today you're in for a big surprise...



I've had this idea in my head for a while and i finally got it out. This is my first submission so i welcome any critique you have to give me.



I like this one on gold because it reminds me of fall.
crafty minx
crafty minx on Sep 27 '07
oh it's cute! i really like it, it just seems to be missing something? can't put my finger on it...
auricle
auricle on Sep 27 '07
I really like it, but consider adding some confused campers in the upper left like they are watching the bear eat a picnic or something like that.
galemk
galemk on Sep 27 '07
Picnics are for sharing! Would be better with a second bear, but I do like your style.
Ruadhan
Ruadhan on Sep 27 '07
thank you so much. I'll see what i can do about the campers and more bears.
DaNextGrate
DaNextGrate on Sep 27 '07
Did he eat the campers (hence the handkerchief)?
azoetrope
azoetrope on Sep 27 '07
Love the idea, not so sure about the execution.
EldanDalis
EldanDalis on Sep 28 '07
Awww it's so cute! I want one..
JoNightshade
JoNightshade on Sep 28 '07
The bear needs to look more like an actual teddy bear and less like a real bear. Where's the woods?
500thecheats
500thecheats on Sep 28 '07
i like the design, but maybe a different color?

like a lite blue or green? i don't know i thinks it's

cool.
Kurtle
Kurtle on Sep 28 '07
Love It!
pearlaceoushecticity
pearlaceoushecticity on Sep 28 '07
i think maybe just more detail in the bear? if you add more characters it might get busy, but i really like where its going.
nessquik_bunny
nessquik_bunny on Sep 29 '07
That is so cute!



I think you should try it out with the other suggestions that people have made - it's a bit simple at the moment. But it's a good start =]
crazymaniac
crazymaniac on Sep 29 '07
its so adorable!
.oOJASTOo.
.oOJASTOo. on Sep 29 '07
I thought the title of this was going to be "EAT BEAVER". To bad.
Merzi
Merzi on Sep 29 '07
I love the song reference and how the bear is looking right at you, he looks so vulnerable. It's cute!
HugoAraujo
HugoAraujo on Sep 29 '07
He is too lonely.
Page Eight
Page Eight on Sep 30 '07
:] hi im new also i really like your bear im gonna five it. Your style is neat ill try and check your page often
whimzy
whimzy on Oct 01 '07
the bear's adorable.

i do agree, i think it needs a companion. maybe a little bear.

i love the simplicity of it.
redroseroyalty
redroseroyalty on Oct 01 '07
Cute! Though I agree it needs a little something... nervous Scout troop leader? Bear companion? Great style, though.
The_BGC
The_BGC on Oct 02 '07
How about a ranger's hat on the bear's head? Great pathos though! Nice one!
Udelhov2
Udelhov2 on Oct 03 '07
I think something is wrong with the bears legs or between them. Looks a little funny.
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felinedev
felinedev on Oct 12 '07
i'm yet to submit one..so..i really appreciate ur work..cute!
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