i didn't exactly work all the hard on it, it was just an old design I found on collecting dust on my comp, and i know it didn't change much from critique, I never had the original source file of the design itself so I could change it with ease, just the plain render to put onto a shirt, and mainly I wanted to get a taste of the threadless scoring thing, w/e
you know what I like about Newgrounds?
If it's not constructive criticism then its deleted. And you can't just write ONE word. ..like, SuCKS, or FAILED.
You have to write like at least four words or more.
And give your ideas on improving the design or animation i should say.
people here are immature and dont know how to give helpful criticism.