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Sam by rptwinkie

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Submitted on:

Sep 27 '07

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18 comments

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Just a toucan livin' it up.

AGil on Sep 27 '07

nice placement, I would like to see a lil more definition on the leaves maybe that darker green to used in the beak. I like it! Well done.

kristinnamin on Sep 27 '07

Kind of boring...I feel like I could walk into K-Mart and find this shirt on a rack.

rptwinkie on Sep 27 '07

I only had one green color, and i was thinking of changing the leaves but i didn't know what to do. And i would hope you couldn't find something like this at Kmart, or else i'd buy shirts from there.

rptwinkie on Sep 27 '07

I have two alternatives for the leaves, let me know what you guys think or what else i should do:

rptwinkie on Sep 27 '07

one
two

ooops

lookin4mystyle on Sep 27 '07

I also like the placement but i agree that the leaf needs alittle more depth. I think it looks best on the purple. you say u only had 1 color of green? what were u using? i don't quite understand the brown under his tail.

lookin4mystyle on Sep 27 '07

i like leaf #1 the best but i think both look detached from the branch. try outlining them in black .

lookin4mystyle on Sep 27 '07

your branch as so much detail and the leaves have none. maybe you could work the same deatail into the leaves by adding veins.

ottr on Sep 27 '07

Yeah, I'm bored.

briligg on Sep 27 '07

what's the red thing on it's butt?

rptwinkie on Sep 27 '07

have you people ever seen a toucan? Toucans have a red tuft of feathers under their tail.
See? NOT a weird butt.

And i meant that i only used one green since that is my max of colors. I'll work on the leaves and post another pic once i've figured out what to do with them.

christApherwayne on Sep 27 '07

well either of those photoshop filters you put on the leaves are going to bump up your color count... try looking at a leaf and using the pen tool.

rptwinkie on Sep 27 '07

Yeah, i figured that... i didn't like them anyway, but i think i found something i do like:

Bird

Thanks for your help, let me know how the newer image looks....

Inorganik on Sep 27 '07

its a shirt... of a bird? well drawn, but I need a concept.

lookin4mystyle on Sep 27 '07

better, but i'd still like to see them w/an outline. they still look disconnected from the branch. BTW... i've seen pictures of toucans but i didn't pay attention the the tuft of feathers under the tail..sorry

rptwinkie on Sep 27 '07

No, that's okay :) I just thought it was funny nobody assumed it was part of the tail. I outlined the leaves in this picture, PLEASE LOOK as my image above is not the image that would be (hopefully) printed...

bird

I know it is a little rough in some spots but they would be fixed.