Hi ! My first design submission here. That's my vision of the TV show "Prison Break", ence the title ;). I hope you'll enjoy it !

Took some time to read but I got it! Not bad.

confusing

i can't read it - :(

too much clutter...

I read it fine. It helps to not be a complete jackball.

It says, "There must be a way out I will find it for sure!"--follow the line of text (some is upside down), rather than the typical left-to-right horizontal reading and you'll see it.

Very neat idea, but I'm not in love with the shape of the potential escapee.

hey, thanks everybody ! :)

The clutter symbolizes Scofield's tatoo ;)

This is a great looking image on the shirt; nice jarb!

I think that the idea that you're trying to convey might come across better if the design looked like Scofield's tattoo. I like the design, but it doesn't say Prison Break to me.

It is readable, but takes a bit of time. kinda IQ testing. I agree that the text has more to do with the inspiration than the overall image. It needs that second layer of symbolism. Without that it is weak and remains a cool start followed by an abrupt halt.

looks great, although i think the text gets harder to read near the end, not in a good way. but like i said, it looks great, and so it almost doesn't matter (almost). good job.