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Eye (Diagram) On The Ball

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Sep 25 '07
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by NJD
I don't know how many people are like me and don't like many 'sports' shirts. I wanted to make a very sublte attempt at a 'sports' shirt for this comp. If you look closely at the 'lense' of the eye I have changed the title to 'Eye on the ball' and the actual lense of eye is changed to a football.



I hope you all enjoy it!
mramigofosho
mramigofosho on Sep 25 '07
its too hard to see the football and it takes a while to see the "eye on the ball" and understand
Peppermont
Peppermont on Sep 26 '07
True that--neat idea but not very clearly shown.
lisey_jean
lisey_jean on Sep 26 '07
Love the idea but I agree I think the football needs to be a bit more obvious. Maybe if it was the colour of a football. But otherwise love it!
Timmy-do
Timmy-do on Sep 26 '07
Goofy kid...Id buy one...
Katie G Agent 003
Katie G Agent 003 on Sep 26 '07
I didn't get it until I read the comments...
squidspawn
squidspawn on Sep 26 '07
wow... really subtle.. but nice idea
Talking To The Ground
Talking To The Ground on Sep 26 '07
...nice idea, but (sorry for this) that is not a good design at all.

It lacks any character, color, and so on.

You should have put it in critique first before posting... people are just going to hit 1 or 0 and just keep going, not even stopping to notice the VERY subtle thing in your design.

Hope this helps you and doesn't discourage you! ^_^
ButterflyWings
ButterflyWings on Sep 26 '07
http://www.nei.nih.gov/health/eyediagram/eyeimages2.asp



It's hardly different than the original. =/
bgonzalez
bgonzalez on Sep 26 '07
Needs to look more like a football
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luck
luck on Oct 01 '07
no. this isn't good.
6 days later
zmandella
zmandella on Oct 08 '07
if you tidy up a bit I'd buy for sure. love the diagrams
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