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Jack in the Box

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Sep 24 '07
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creepy jack in the box idea... let me know what you guys think. the colors are still up in the air, but i want them to stay bold. thanks in advance for comments!
discounteggroll
discounteggroll on Sep 24 '07
a little too scary for even the extreme crowd, make an innocent child cranking it and freaking out, and you're onto something!
Keter
Keter on Sep 24 '07
The spring looks like a line; everything else has more detail. The guy running away is perhaps too far away.
joshcrates
joshcrates on Sep 25 '07
i agree about the spring and the fleeing victim. they seem rather disconnected stylistically and due to proportions. i realize that we addressed that in class. beyond that, a skilled illustration and a sweet concept. the colors are rad.
benROACH
benROACH on Sep 25 '07
yea i subbed my non-finalized version of this image on accident, the finished version has no one running away and the spring has highlights on it... sooo... my bad.
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