creepy jack in the box idea... let me know what you guys think. the colors are still up in the air, but i want them to stay bold. thanks in advance for comments!

a little too scary for even the extreme crowd, make an innocent child cranking it and freaking out, and you're onto something!

The spring looks like a line; everything else has more detail. The guy running away is perhaps too far away.

i agree about the spring and the fleeing victim. they seem rather disconnected stylistically and due to proportions. i realize that we addressed that in class. beyond that, a skilled illustration and a sweet concept. the colors are rad.

yea i subbed my non-finalized version of this image on accident, the finished version has no one running away and the spring has highlights on it... sooo... my bad.